
7/23/2006 c2
9Asenka.N.Chernyaeva
Wha! You stop! WHY YOU STOP! Uh... please forgive my sudden loss of linguistic skill...
Hee :) I love them. I love the story, too, because it has a very unique perspective and plotline. Please continue this soon?

Wha! You stop! WHY YOU STOP! Uh... please forgive my sudden loss of linguistic skill...
Hee :) I love them. I love the story, too, because it has a very unique perspective and plotline. Please continue this soon?
8/20/2005 c2
2Katherine-For-You
Oh .my. God. I haven't read slash this good EVER. It's so enchanting!So full of the right element that makes it charmingly unique and different from all other plotless stories. I definetly love it. Update soon please and I will be sure to read and review.

Oh .my. God. I haven't read slash this good EVER. It's so enchanting!So full of the right element that makes it charmingly unique and different from all other plotless stories. I definetly love it. Update soon please and I will be sure to read and review.
7/15/2005 c2
3tangled-wires-of-doom
This is really aweosome! Gotta love two hot gay guys *_* lol.Can't wait for a 3rd chapter!

This is really aweosome! Gotta love two hot gay guys *_* lol.Can't wait for a 3rd chapter!
7/15/2005 c2 Aril
Part 2? PART 2? Where the devil is part 3?Damn that is a good story, one of the best I've ever seen out of that kind of scenario, and I want to know what happens next! lol.I am particularly curious though as to their ages.I really have no idea but from the telling it gave the impression Steve was between 23 and 33...Hnn, I like him. ~Aril
Part 2? PART 2? Where the devil is part 3?Damn that is a good story, one of the best I've ever seen out of that kind of scenario, and I want to know what happens next! lol.I am particularly curious though as to their ages.I really have no idea but from the telling it gave the impression Steve was between 23 and 33...Hnn, I like him. ~Aril
11/25/2004 c2 Christoph M. McKay
Sorry it took me so long to review your story. This is amazing work! I love it. I really hope to see more chapters come from this story. Please update soon!
Sorry it took me so long to review your story. This is amazing work! I love it. I really hope to see more chapters come from this story. Please update soon!
9/4/2004 c2
2joeybear
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6/22/2004 c2
5hupsoonheng
o.o! Ooh, ooh, more more more! =D Sean's transformation of opinion was a little sudden, but I still likey ^^ Keep him prostituting a little longer, though?

o.o! Ooh, ooh, more more more! =D Sean's transformation of opinion was a little sudden, but I still likey ^^ Keep him prostituting a little longer, though?
4/3/2004 c2 Fallen Angel
More! More! More! Please?
~Fallen Angel
More! More! More! Please?
~Fallen Angel
11/14/2003 c2 PseudoBohemian
I like this a lot, it's got a nice feel to it - sexual but romantic, and also...painful if atired way...
~Pseudo
I like this a lot, it's got a nice feel to it - sexual but romantic, and also...painful if atired way...
~Pseudo
10/31/2003 c2
7Hopechest
I really enjoyed reading this story. Sean's character seems very well fleshed out, and I look forward to seeing more of Steve's character come out of the shadows in the future. You captured the angle of the story fairly accurately, and the first person POV works marvellously.
Aside from a few typos I noticed the whole story's great. Hurry up and get out the next chapter. I'm curious to see why Steve winced when Sean mentioned those bands. ^_^.

I really enjoyed reading this story. Sean's character seems very well fleshed out, and I look forward to seeing more of Steve's character come out of the shadows in the future. You captured the angle of the story fairly accurately, and the first person POV works marvellously.
Aside from a few typos I noticed the whole story's great. Hurry up and get out the next chapter. I'm curious to see why Steve winced when Sean mentioned those bands. ^_^.
8/23/2003 c2
7Masked Angel
This is absolutely amazing! *wipes a tear from her eye* I love it I love it I love it!

This is absolutely amazing! *wipes a tear from her eye* I love it I love it I love it!