for The Battle Stone3/5/2012 c4 Hannah
I really enjoyed this story. :) I think it has definite potential, and you should keep writing it; if you want to, of course. I really liked Cadwgawn, and was seething at Reis for constantly taunting him, Sir Peder for being so critical, and the first page who Cadwgawn nearly killed for taunting him too. Poor guy.
You did a great job with this. :)
I really enjoyed this story. :) I think it has definite potential, and you should keep writing it; if you want to, of course. I really liked Cadwgawn, and was seething at Reis for constantly taunting him, Sir Peder for being so critical, and the first page who Cadwgawn nearly killed for taunting him too. Poor guy.
You did a great job with this. :)
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20KalliopesMuse
Hello... I've been reading through stories today, and I was kind of glad to come across one like yours. I like your writing style so far- it's clear and, as one reviewer already put it, to the point. Also, your dialogue doesn't come off as "fake" or trying to sound different or archaic. This beginning reminds me of the beginning of the movie King Arthur- when Lancelot is taken away from his family to be a knight. Good work.- Sarika
20KalliopesMuseHello... I've been reading through stories today, and I was kind of glad to come across one like yours. I like your writing style so far- it's clear and, as one reviewer already put it, to the point. Also, your dialogue doesn't come off as "fake" or trying to sound different or archaic. This beginning reminds me of the beginning of the movie King Arthur- when Lancelot is taken away from his family to be a knight. Good work.- Sarika
7/6/2006 c4 4Angelic Brunette Hermione
Your characters are curiously intesting. I don't know whether to like or dislike Reis, but I admire Cadwgawn's spirit.
ABH
PS: I've updated my story yesterday. I'd be flattered if you critiqued it to see if I've improved.
4Angelic Brunette HermioneYour characters are curiously intesting. I don't know whether to like or dislike Reis, but I admire Cadwgawn's spirit.
ABH
PS: I've updated my story yesterday. I'd be flattered if you critiqued it to see if I've improved.
6/24/2006 c2 Angelic Brunette Hermione
Hey there! I hope you'll gonna update this story soon, it is quite good.
But this review is in gratitude for reviewing my own story. I appreciate your kind criticism. Don't worry about the characters! As you'll find out as the story goes on, they'll mature and become "unstatic" (for lack of a better word. lol). I appreciate reviews as you always know!
ABH
Hey there! I hope you'll gonna update this story soon, it is quite good.
But this review is in gratitude for reviewing my own story. I appreciate your kind criticism. Don't worry about the characters! As you'll find out as the story goes on, they'll mature and become "unstatic" (for lack of a better word. lol). I appreciate reviews as you always know!
ABH
6/23/2006 c3 17kristy23
Oh, I really like this story and honestly did not expect to. Your writing is very clear and to-the-point, and I like how you allow the reader to form their own characertizations of your characters from their actions and their conversations. Good job.
17kristy23Oh, I really like this story and honestly did not expect to. Your writing is very clear and to-the-point, and I like how you allow the reader to form their own characertizations of your characters from their actions and their conversations. Good job.
6/19/2006 c3 4Angelic Brunette Hermione
That was really well done! I loved the imagery that your words create in my mind. I'll be keeping my eyes open for an update.
A.B.H.
PS: If it is not so much to ask, I have a new story that I've recently updated, and I was wondering if you would read and critique it. I'd be flattered if you gave your imput.
4Angelic Brunette HermioneThat was really well done! I loved the imagery that your words create in my mind. I'll be keeping my eyes open for an update.
A.B.H.
PS: If it is not so much to ask, I have a new story that I've recently updated, and I was wondering if you would read and critique it. I'd be flattered if you gave your imput.
6/5/2006 c1 anon
A nice start. :) (Although I'm going to have to be finicky and tell you that Cadwgawn is pronounced Cad-oo-gown [despite being the origin of Cadogan] and Fychan is Vuh-can [with a harsh CH, of course]. Sorry, I'm Welsh and can't help it.)
But I do like your idea for this story though, quite original.
A nice start. :) (Although I'm going to have to be finicky and tell you that Cadwgawn is pronounced Cad-oo-gown [despite being the origin of Cadogan] and Fychan is Vuh-can [with a harsh CH, of course]. Sorry, I'm Welsh and can't help it.)
But I do like your idea for this story though, quite original.