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7/17/2006 c1 2Asinine Epiphany
I don't even think that's a bad thing. How I would love to be burried under a playground! To know that my body is part of the foundation of a solace for children...where dreams are born...hehe, sorry, I love playgrounds. Anyways, I agree with the earlier reviewer...you may want to lose structure and just let yourself go. This was good, for sure, but very simplistic and rigid...
6/5/2006 c1 8Jack Weston
I like what you've got, but I would really encourage you to experiment with different rhythm and rhyme schemes, even free verse. Different types of poetry can really bring a whole new way of adding depth and dimention to your poems!

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