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6/8/2006 c1 Halcyon Impulsion
Lots of excellent imagery in this one. Nice work!
6/6/2006 c1 194Aslan Israel
Pretty in poetry's sense, but not something I necessarily believe in. But anyway, you did very well putting it together, especially near the end. Very nice.
6/5/2006 c1 29Bita-chan
It is actually very pretty, and I like your rhyming, it doesn't feel forced.

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