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9/26/2006 c1 scotti
YEAH! I absolutly loved this piece! You've presented the constant internal struggle of a man's soul entrenched in a battle between good and evil, in a down to earth way that anyone can grasp and understand. You can almost physically feel what the character is going through, and your descriptions were superb and vivid. "I’m barely a Christian. But so help me God, I am saved.”...This line spoke volumes to me. Well done! ~Scottie
9/26/2006 c1 41Neurotic Consciousness
Good perceptions and depths. Interesting example of the phenomenon that is religion and its interaction with the human mind... Only thing was, it seemed that the star of the story transitioned rather quickly from one extreme to another. I've never found total redemption and forgiveness of one's self a quick process, but mabye the suddenness of the transition was meant to convey something? Or mabye you just wanted to keep the story short? Anyways, good story.
7/1/2006 c1 Newsgirl Poet
DUDE! that was awesome. that was really deep. I personally liked the fact that it was a Christian fic. Nice!
6/17/2006 c1 306Ashelin
Oh, I really like it. The transition, the hope. Great job!
6/12/2006 c1 6Annie Louise
um im confused

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