for Eggshells in Mo ti on2/23/2007 c1 
131theory of black
okay, so basically... this is one of the most poetically tragic things i've ever read. i love this and i absolutely loved the line "but I'm just as hollow as my personality". beautiful. i also love the last couplet. it gave a very sad twist to the whole thing, almost like "well, it's good enough, so i guess i'll live with it". that's what i got out of it, at least.
131theory of blackokay, so basically... this is one of the most poetically tragic things i've ever read. i love this and i absolutely loved the line "but I'm just as hollow as my personality". beautiful. i also love the last couplet. it gave a very sad twist to the whole thing, almost like "well, it's good enough, so i guess i'll live with it". that's what i got out of it, at least.
12/15/2006 c1 36contrast and friction
"lying in the grass doesn’t give green (envy) grass stains;
it’s the moving that does."
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"so don’t move, darling.
we are fine where we are"
Beautifully brilliant.
36contrast and friction"lying in the grass doesn’t give green (envy) grass stains;
it’s the moving that does."
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"so don’t move, darling.
we are fine where we are"
Beautifully brilliant.
7/31/2006 c1 27RosepetalDoll
so great. this describes exactly how i feel. it brought tears to my eyes how much i can realte to this. especially the last line. capitivating. keep writeing. katlin
27RosepetalDollso great. this describes exactly how i feel. it brought tears to my eyes how much i can realte to this. especially the last line. capitivating. keep writeing. katlin
6/8/2006 c1 a lonely september
i love the last two lines, they just mean so much and this whole poem was just great. wonderful job.
i love the last two lines, they just mean so much and this whole poem was just great. wonderful job.