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2/23/2007 c1 131theory of black
okay, so basically... this is one of the most poetically tragic things i've ever read. i love this and i absolutely loved the line "but I'm just as hollow as my personality". beautiful. i also love the last couplet. it gave a very sad twist to the whole thing, almost like "well, it's good enough, so i guess i'll live with it". that's what i got out of it, at least.
12/15/2006 c1 36contrast and friction
"lying in the grass doesn’t give green (envy) grass stains;

it’s the moving that does."


"so don’t move, darling.

we are fine where we are"

Beautifully brilliant.
7/31/2006 c1 27RosepetalDoll
so great. this describes exactly how i feel. it brought tears to my eyes how much i can realte to this. especially the last line. capitivating. keep writeing. katlin
7/1/2006 c1 194Aslan Israel
m ha, eggs are just so messy. but then again so are hearts.
6/18/2006 c1 65Aquafied
we are fine

eggshells and nights.reminds me of a good time
6/10/2006 c1 2having reached closure
hmm interesting. i like the comparison you used here.

6/8/2006 c1 a lonely september
i love the last two lines, they just mean so much and this whole poem was just great. wonderful job.
6/7/2006 c1 29diffident
Very interesting egg simile. The poem seems a little bit empty and distant, but that adds to the context of the poem.


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