
7/17/2011 c1
3AnonomousNotReally
great job! i really got the feel of what you were saying. hey, i would bve etstatic of you read and reveiwed my story, Home for the Normal Impaired. I dont want to seem like i'm fishing for reviews of anything. Great job!

great job! i really got the feel of what you were saying. hey, i would bve etstatic of you read and reveiwed my story, Home for the Normal Impaired. I dont want to seem like i'm fishing for reviews of anything. Great job!
10/24/2009 c6 z
Your story is interesting and all, but there a few flukes.
Penn is... for lack of a better word, a bitch. And how could she get into a private school if she stinks at math? All my friends who are appling for scholarships are either of average intelligence (leaning on very smart) or complete geniuses who never even need to study. Most of them have only even gotten part scholarships.
Your story is interesting and all, but there a few flukes.
Penn is... for lack of a better word, a bitch. And how could she get into a private school if she stinks at math? All my friends who are appling for scholarships are either of average intelligence (leaning on very smart) or complete geniuses who never even need to study. Most of them have only even gotten part scholarships.
4/30/2009 c8 plastick.roses
AH! i'm so happy you updated after a few years...but you, um, stopped...again...
Anyways. Wonderful chapter! Continue with the great work
AH! i'm so happy you updated after a few years...but you, um, stopped...again...
Anyways. Wonderful chapter! Continue with the great work
4/20/2009 c3
10Sabreal
No way, your not fluent in spanish? Come to think of it, there hasn't been much if any spanish convos so far, so why the HELL did i think you knew the language?
Anyway, studied the lang. for two years and beautiful as it is, i just couldn't keep up :)
Your best bet is for a translator on google or better yet an ACTUAL PERSON.
If you're still searching for a spanish speaker that is :):)

No way, your not fluent in spanish? Come to think of it, there hasn't been much if any spanish convos so far, so why the HELL did i think you knew the language?
Anyway, studied the lang. for two years and beautiful as it is, i just couldn't keep up :)
Your best bet is for a translator on google or better yet an ACTUAL PERSON.
If you're still searching for a spanish speaker that is :):)
4/20/2009 c2 Sabreal
Ooh, loving Gavin already...
and I can't believe you gave my most favorite name ever (for a boy) to such an asshole like Jack's character. :(
Oh well. Names get used. PEOPLE get used.
Like dear old Pen here...
Should get back to readin now before I pointlessly ramble...
Ooh, loving Gavin already...
and I can't believe you gave my most favorite name ever (for a boy) to such an asshole like Jack's character. :(
Oh well. Names get used. PEOPLE get used.
Like dear old Pen here...
Should get back to readin now before I pointlessly ramble...
4/20/2009 c1 Sabreal
I was laughing out loud through several parts of this chapter- so very well done!=D
If I felt more chirpier I would've gone back and quoted the exact lines that made me laugh hard- but what the hell...you wrote it, right? So you know where all the funny parts are... For once, I shall resist quoting back the author and just applaud her writing skills throughout!
much love
x
I was laughing out loud through several parts of this chapter- so very well done!=D
If I felt more chirpier I would've gone back and quoted the exact lines that made me laugh hard- but what the hell...you wrote it, right? So you know where all the funny parts are... For once, I shall resist quoting back the author and just applaud her writing skills throughout!
much love
x
11/29/2008 c8
4Kimera77
Great story! Nice character development.Keep it up! PD: Love Pen's personality. Very strongly presented.

Great story! Nice character development.Keep it up! PD: Love Pen's personality. Very strongly presented.
11/19/2008 c8 Kathadoodle
I love this story so far. It is so unique, and the highschool setting is interesting! Update ASAP!
I love this story so far. It is so unique, and the highschool setting is interesting! Update ASAP!