for Incest: It's All Relative4/2/2017 c26 linn
I need more! I loved this, a lot! You write wonderfully! This should get published, I swear. I really hope that you are ok. Hugs
I need more! I loved this, a lot! You write wonderfully! This should get published, I swear. I really hope that you are ok. Hugs
12/22/2013 c26 Dominique Diane
This story started in an amazing and awesome way, I love the strong love they had between each other but then the last few chapters were confusing and the way Claudia turned was a big change, a not so good change...(I'm telling you this as a constructive review, I mean, I read the whole story and LOOOVED IT) The only thing is what happen to the love? to their love? and the prologue, it didn't make so much sense as the story started devoping. Did Claudia collapse while living in her home and Steve was how old? and those kind of things. But even after all that that this is still one of my favorite stories. Please continue!
Lots of Love!
This story started in an amazing and awesome way, I love the strong love they had between each other but then the last few chapters were confusing and the way Claudia turned was a big change, a not so good change...(I'm telling you this as a constructive review, I mean, I read the whole story and LOOOVED IT) The only thing is what happen to the love? to their love? and the prologue, it didn't make so much sense as the story started devoping. Did Claudia collapse while living in her home and Steve was how old? and those kind of things. But even after all that that this is still one of my favorite stories. Please continue!
Lots of Love!
6/3/2013 c1 Pebbles
To write about incest takes a more delicate hand that normal erotic prose. Because of the closeness of the relationship it is all too easy to fall into the trap of allowing siblings to blindly rush into sexual activity. Actually it is far from the truth because there are more taboos and barriers between siblings than a normal pair of similar age. There is a hint here that you may have found that narrow path.
To write about incest takes a more delicate hand that normal erotic prose. Because of the closeness of the relationship it is all too easy to fall into the trap of allowing siblings to blindly rush into sexual activity. Actually it is far from the truth because there are more taboos and barriers between siblings than a normal pair of similar age. There is a hint here that you may have found that narrow path.
5/26/2013 c15 Guest
Faith and Preston would be such a good couple!
Faith and Preston would be such a good couple!
4/26/2013 c26 MandaMae928
Hi! I just started reading your story a couple days ago and I love it! I know its been several months since you updated, I was wondering if you were going to continue this story or not. Please do...its so good. I couldn't stop reading
Hi! I just started reading your story a couple days ago and I love it! I know its been several months since you updated, I was wondering if you were going to continue this story or not. Please do...its so good. I couldn't stop reading
9/17/2012 c26 
2Quantum Reality
Aw. :) I liked the way Preston was being so wise and thoughtful here. It can be hard to realize you're drifting away from your friends and even feels a bit bad when you don't mind drifting even more because you realize you actually have very little in common besides the same high school.
I hope Claudia and Faith don't drift apart, though. They seem like they could both be really good for each other as friends as Faith eventually gets out from under her controlling and abusive parents, and Claudia finally acknowledges what Faith asked her about so long ago - about wanting Steve to not be her brother so they could date if they wanted to.
2Quantum RealityAw. :) I liked the way Preston was being so wise and thoughtful here. It can be hard to realize you're drifting away from your friends and even feels a bit bad when you don't mind drifting even more because you realize you actually have very little in common besides the same high school.
I hope Claudia and Faith don't drift apart, though. They seem like they could both be really good for each other as friends as Faith eventually gets out from under her controlling and abusive parents, and Claudia finally acknowledges what Faith asked her about so long ago - about wanting Steve to not be her brother so they could date if they wanted to.
9/17/2012 c25 Quantum Reality
Steve! Yay! And I like how you casually refer back to the illicit relationship between Steve and Claudia, as well as the troubles they have between them, for all that they still love each other.
Steve! Yay! And I like how you casually refer back to the illicit relationship between Steve and Claudia, as well as the troubles they have between them, for all that they still love each other.
9/17/2012 c24 Quantum Reality
I liked this chapter. There was just something about the way you swept through Claudia's life, intercutting between the Cosmo article and her inner thoughts. :)
I liked this chapter. There was just something about the way you swept through Claudia's life, intercutting between the Cosmo article and her inner thoughts. :)
9/17/2012 c23 Quantum Reality
"Yeah, it's Berkeley," he shrugged like he hadn't just said the name of one of the most amazing schools in North America, "But California isn't here, and Berkeley doesn't have you."
Awwwwwwwww. :)
I love how Preston's so into Faith he doesn't mind that she doesn't quite grasp why he would pass up a huge career opportunity for her.
But she's learning. :) He'll be good for her, and her for him. :)
"Yeah, it's Berkeley," he shrugged like he hadn't just said the name of one of the most amazing schools in North America, "But California isn't here, and Berkeley doesn't have you."
Awwwwwwwww. :)
I love how Preston's so into Faith he doesn't mind that she doesn't quite grasp why he would pass up a huge career opportunity for her.
But she's learning. :) He'll be good for her, and her for him. :)