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11/30/2006 c1 73ten pts above average
I cant even find the words to express how dazed in amazement I am at this second...that was the most amazingly passionate absolutely brilliant piece of poetry I have ever *underlined* written...Im still at a loss for words...the imagery was fascinating...I could hear the music in my head, I could see the dancer, and the feel the intensity when she paused...my most surely skipped a beat...I am in awe of your writing :] you are most definitely going on my favorite authors list! I would be honored if you reviewed a few of my works...btw thx for your review way back when on my Cinderella Story poem :]:] ~tenptsaboveaverage
6/11/2006 c1 pure grace
This is absotively positutely GORGEOUS! Reading you makes me a happy panda. Everything was sublime - rhythm, rhyme, and I LOVED your use of alliteration, especially since you paired (sometimes tripled or quadrupled) words that wouldn't normally be found together, but made such beautiful, perfect sense here. You did a fantastic job; bravissimo!
6/9/2006 c1 27firstlostgirl
This poem flows really well and invokes some beautiful imagery. I like how you wrote about the two sides to it - the beauty and the danger. Nice work.
6/9/2006 c1 12SwitchVale
Damn, that was one of the best poems I have ever read in my life. My heart was racing reading the words, I couldn't read them fast enough to keep up with the poem! I hope you never stop writing poetry

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