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8/23/2006 c1 4theLethean
Great story! Steve's very easy to identify and sympathise with, his frustrations with his job and his mother come across perfectly. I hope you're planning on writing more!

P.S Thanks for your review on Hunt!
6/9/2006 c1 13gabriellafaith
That was...interesting, to say the least. There were quite a few mis-uses of commas, especially in the top part of the entry for Feb. 19. Other than that, I really enjoyed reading this piece. It was a little funny...in a disgusting, ironic sort of way. I liked it. You have an interesting style of writing. Good job.-gabi

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