for Of Happenstance and Mishmash2/2/2008 c3 abby
whoa, i am loving this story so far! update soon!
whoa, i am loving this story so far! update soon!
12/27/2007 c3 A.E.T
Interesting. I like it! I enjoy Devon, and his sense of humor. I look forward to seeing more.
Interesting. I like it! I enjoy Devon, and his sense of humor. I look forward to seeing more.
1/8/2007 c3 Ghostmoon Dancer
it's good :D
it's good :D
9/15/2006 c1 
17JahLoveAngel
So I just discovered this story from someone who'd put this on their favorite stories list, and I can definately see why.
I love the setup already. I'm glad the next chapter is up so I can see what happens next!
17JahLoveAngelSo I just discovered this story from someone who'd put this on their favorite stories list, and I can definately see why.
I love the setup already. I'm glad the next chapter is up so I can see what happens next!
8/25/2006 c2 1my heart is in ohio
I don't normally review stories I read, but I have to tell you how much I like this story so far. I love the point of view switches and how they always back each other up (i.e. we see Peter's unsureness and shyness, and then we see it from Devon's point of view so that it's showing us instead of telling us, etc.) I love the dialogue as well, something about it is just very well-written, but at the same time, realistic. Kudos. I definitely look forward to an update.
1my heart is in ohioI don't normally review stories I read, but I have to tell you how much I like this story so far. I love the point of view switches and how they always back each other up (i.e. we see Peter's unsureness and shyness, and then we see it from Devon's point of view so that it's showing us instead of telling us, etc.) I love the dialogue as well, something about it is just very well-written, but at the same time, realistic. Kudos. I definitely look forward to an update.
7/19/2006 c1 1mich mich
kimper darling! I see we both like the name jason, and though my jason is an ass, at least he's nicer than your jason...i think lol. I'll be reading this from now on, and if you don't continue, i'll send you all the kleenex's that i used to cry, okay?
1mich michkimper darling! I see we both like the name jason, and though my jason is an ass, at least he's nicer than your jason...i think lol. I'll be reading this from now on, and if you don't continue, i'll send you all the kleenex's that i used to cry, okay?
7/2/2006 c2 5living-out-a-sacrifice
I really liked this. Realistic and fresh. I can't wait for more.
As someone else coming from the fanfiction community, I understand what you're going through. Keep going, babe.
5living-out-a-sacrificeI really liked this. Realistic and fresh. I can't wait for more.
As someone else coming from the fanfiction community, I understand what you're going through. Keep going, babe.
6/27/2006 c1 39Griezula
I actually started reading this before, but then I got sidetracked. ;o; i'm so happy I got to finish it! It's really good and has great description and... stuff. Haha. I'll be waiting for more, for sure!
39GriezulaI actually started reading this before, but then I got sidetracked. ;o; i'm so happy I got to finish it! It's really good and has great description and... stuff. Haha. I'll be waiting for more, for sure!
6/20/2006 c1 1jive maxwell
You're a good writer; do you have stuff on fanfiction.com? If so, what kind of fanfiction do you write? I have something on there, but it's not finished. Anyway, this is excellent, thanks for reviewing my story! *love, hugs*
1jive maxwellYou're a good writer; do you have stuff on fanfiction.com? If so, what kind of fanfiction do you write? I have something on there, but it's not finished. Anyway, this is excellent, thanks for reviewing my story! *love, hugs*
6/13/2006 c1 25Esquirella
Jason sounds like a jackass! Can Devon get rid of him for Peter? And is Michael in the closet?
25EsquirellaJason sounds like a jackass! Can Devon get rid of him for Peter? And is Michael in the closet?
6/11/2006 c1 Ghostmoon Dancer
wow. great first chapter, got me hooked. hope you continue with this story. for a first it's amazing.
wow. great first chapter, got me hooked. hope you continue with this story. for a first it's amazing.