for Ware the Madness of the Gift10/20/2006 c1 Allen
monobonded carbon?
Did you read reality dysfunction or did you make it up?
monobonded carbon?
Did you read reality dysfunction or did you make it up?
10/6/2006 c39 
1T. Com
Very good. I did have a problem with the guy saying, "We're Jumping." During the FTL-Jump. It just didn't read very professional. But maybe that's me.
Anyway, keep 'em coming.
1T. ComVery good. I did have a problem with the guy saying, "We're Jumping." During the FTL-Jump. It just didn't read very professional. But maybe that's me.
Anyway, keep 'em coming.
9/27/2006 c37 T. Com
Sendai's response to the broadcast was so appropriate and realistic. I know that's the first word that would have come out of my mouth.
That cocktail name is fabulous.
Just wanted to commend you on a fabulous job of world-building. The universe you've created is a bit weird but far more detailed than nearly all of the crap that is written on this site.
Keep it up! (I meant the great chapters! Heheh.)
Sendai's response to the broadcast was so appropriate and realistic. I know that's the first word that would have come out of my mouth.
That cocktail name is fabulous.
Just wanted to commend you on a fabulous job of world-building. The universe you've created is a bit weird but far more detailed than nearly all of the crap that is written on this site.
Keep it up! (I meant the great chapters! Heheh.)
9/25/2006 c36 T. Com
Man, you're just so bad... and yet so wicked awesome!
And I somehow knew that the two lovers would be male. Heheh.
Keep 'em coming.
Man, you're just so bad... and yet so wicked awesome!
And I somehow knew that the two lovers would be male. Heheh.
Keep 'em coming.
9/15/2006 c35 T. Com
Glad to see your back in action. Issendai really knows how to party, huh?
Looking foward to following chapters.
Glad to see your back in action. Issendai really knows how to party, huh?
Looking foward to following chapters.
8/16/2006 c31 T. Com
"...Sendai's ass feel pleasantly warm and used."
Quite possibly the funniest line I've read in your entire story. But only because I'm a sick, sick little man.
"...Sendai's ass feel pleasantly warm and used."
Quite possibly the funniest line I've read in your entire story. But only because I'm a sick, sick little man.
8/15/2006 c29 T. Com
Yeah, that scene at the end was disgustingly romantic.
I did have a problem with different characters dialog appearing in the same paragraph. It makes it hard to figure out who the hells talking sometimes.
Anyhoo, the story's still looking proper.
Yeah, that scene at the end was disgustingly romantic.
I did have a problem with different characters dialog appearing in the same paragraph. It makes it hard to figure out who the hells talking sometimes.
Anyhoo, the story's still looking proper.
8/11/2006 c27 T. Com
Yup, that Kappamaki would be hilarious if she wasn't so completely out of her mind. Another fantastic character but I don't know about the bit with the minigun keeping them all swayed. It seems a bit too straightforward for a wily corporate shark.
But it was refreshing to see.
Keep up the great work.
Yup, that Kappamaki would be hilarious if she wasn't so completely out of her mind. Another fantastic character but I don't know about the bit with the minigun keeping them all swayed. It seems a bit too straightforward for a wily corporate shark.
But it was refreshing to see.
Keep up the great work.
8/5/2006 c24 160bloodtide
“Why did you do something so idiotic?”
Lol thats great. Another good chapter.
Notice in my previous review that I even managed to misquote the title of my own fiction. Says alot about alot.
160bloodtide“Why did you do something so idiotic?”
Lol thats great. Another good chapter.
Notice in my previous review that I even managed to misquote the title of my own fiction. Says alot about alot.
8/3/2006 c23 bloodtide
An good story so far, extra points for the splashes of gore and the excellent descriptive language you tend to use.
Cheers for the review of The Casimir Engine. Even though a large part of writing is for my own enjoyment, it always pays off in full when you know someones enjoyed what you've written, and I hope you carry on in the same mindset of it not being a load of tripe.
Keep writing.
An good story so far, extra points for the splashes of gore and the excellent descriptive language you tend to use.
Cheers for the review of The Casimir Engine. Even though a large part of writing is for my own enjoyment, it always pays off in full when you know someones enjoyed what you've written, and I hope you carry on in the same mindset of it not being a load of tripe.
Keep writing.
7/29/2006 c21 1T. Com
Well, though I'm more of a blood-and-guts, action-adventure fan, I do enjoy your stories for the rare seriousness, professionalism and raw talent that you so readily display.
I can't say it enough that real gems like your story get passed over for recognition so much. I think it's because your writing requires a reader to think. And we know that most human beings, oddly enough, seem to have a problem doing that.
Later,
1T. ComWell, though I'm more of a blood-and-guts, action-adventure fan, I do enjoy your stories for the rare seriousness, professionalism and raw talent that you so readily display.
I can't say it enough that real gems like your story get passed over for recognition so much. I think it's because your writing requires a reader to think. And we know that most human beings, oddly enough, seem to have a problem doing that.
Later,
7/28/2006 c19 T. Com
A little short but definitely sweet. I can't wait to see where you're taking all these... interesting characters.
I don't even want to know a this 'Goring' entailed.
Proper equals good as Christmas equals carnage.
Keep 'em comin', Marinus.
A little short but definitely sweet. I can't wait to see where you're taking all these... interesting characters.
I don't even want to know a this 'Goring' entailed.
Proper equals good as Christmas equals carnage.
Keep 'em comin', Marinus.