3/7/2007 c7 free-to-dream15
OMG so I've been busy for like forever lately and so today I actually got a chance to go around fictionpress..and as I was wondering, i startign thinking of this story and what's happen to it and I coudlnt remember who was writing it! So I'm like oh well Opal updated I'd better read and then I come to find out that you are writing this story! so as you can tell I'm very happy! Good update now update soon!
OMG so I've been busy for like forever lately and so today I actually got a chance to go around fictionpress..and as I was wondering, i startign thinking of this story and what's happen to it and I coudlnt remember who was writing it! So I'm like oh well Opal updated I'd better read and then I come to find out that you are writing this story! so as you can tell I'm very happy! Good update now update soon!
2/19/2007 c7 Nut
Oh no! I liked Jack! Why does he have to be bad now? Ah! Poor Melissa . . .
Oh no! I liked Jack! Why does he have to be bad now? Ah! Poor Melissa . . .
7/1/2006 c6 free-to-dream15
Wow, I'm going with Talia has gone like insane but I don't know if I can blame her, or can I? I don't know. Update SOON!
Wow, I'm going with Talia has gone like insane but I don't know if I can blame her, or can I? I don't know. Update SOON!
6/30/2006 c6 11Tzotel431
Hey, Ben is a believeable chaacter! Do not say that he isn't, I love him!
Talia is having a really rough time, she shouldn't have that diary anymore!
And don't worry about the dates, honest mistakes are nothing to be embarrased about!
~Tzotel
Hey, Ben is a believeable chaacter! Do not say that he isn't, I love him!
Talia is having a really rough time, she shouldn't have that diary anymore!
And don't worry about the dates, honest mistakes are nothing to be embarrased about!
~Tzotel
6/30/2006 c6 23Nut
Nice chapter. Talia definitely seems to be losing it . . . poor Gary. Good work =)
Nice chapter. Talia definitely seems to be losing it . . . poor Gary. Good work =)
6/29/2006 c5 free-to-dream15
Well now I am not confused at all and that is just terrible of GARY but I guess that it's not entirely his fault! Oh no, I'm guess Talia's dad got to Alicia, that's not good! Update SOON! (and sorry it took me so long to read, I was out of town)
Well now I am not confused at all and that is just terrible of GARY but I guess that it's not entirely his fault! Oh no, I'm guess Talia's dad got to Alicia, that's not good! Update SOON! (and sorry it took me so long to read, I was out of town)
6/24/2006 c5 11Tzotel431
Ok, a sad thing just came to my notice. You had Alicia die on April 15, 2004. But there are diary entries on October 8, and 16 of 2004. Shouldn't she be dead then?
And did Talia's dad sleep with Alicia?
UPDATE SOON!
~Tzotel
Ok, a sad thing just came to my notice. You had Alicia die on April 15, 2004. But there are diary entries on October 8, and 16 of 2004. Shouldn't she be dead then?
And did Talia's dad sleep with Alicia?
UPDATE SOON!
~Tzotel
6/24/2006 c4 Tzotel431
Oh no, Gary is not gonna like what he finds out in that Diary! Not good! And poor Talia, she doesn't want to tell Gary about his dad...
~Tzotel
Oh no, Gary is not gonna like what he finds out in that Diary! Not good! And poor Talia, she doesn't want to tell Gary about his dad...
~Tzotel
6/24/2006 c3 Tzotel431
Take your time with Can THhis Be Me? the last chapters of stories always have to be perfect! This was really good, so Daniel is Gary's dad? Ew...that is so gross!
~Tzotel
Take your time with Can THhis Be Me? the last chapters of stories always have to be perfect! This was really good, so Daniel is Gary's dad? Ew...that is so gross!
~Tzotel
6/24/2006 c2 Tzotel431
Another good chapter, but I have a feeling that you told us that Daniel killed her...i think it would have been better to wait to reveal the killer until later, for suspense, just my opinion...It was really good, again with the words and grammar, but very good!
~Tzotel
Another good chapter, but I have a feeling that you told us that Daniel killed her...i think it would have been better to wait to reveal the killer until later, for suspense, just my opinion...It was really good, again with the words and grammar, but very good!
~Tzotel
6/24/2006 c1 Tzotel431
Ok, so I finally got around to reading your story, sorry it tookso long! I was so busy with school and finishing my own story, but now I have no school and am starting a new story, I have no rush! This is really good, some words and gramatical mistakes, but readable and enjoyable!
I'll read more soon!
~Tzotel
Ok, so I finally got around to reading your story, sorry it tookso long! I was so busy with school and finishing my own story, but now I have no school and am starting a new story, I have no rush! This is really good, some words and gramatical mistakes, but readable and enjoyable!
I'll read more soon!
~Tzotel
6/21/2006 c5 3Clapperx0h
omfg! i love this story! o jesus i hope talia and gary stay together... omg yah i love this story and can't wait to read the next chapter!
omfg! i love this story! o jesus i hope talia and gary stay together... omg yah i love this story and can't wait to read the next chapter!
6/21/2006 c5 23Nut
I'm kind of mad that Talia forgave Gary so soon. I mean if I found out that my boyfriend stole my diary and slept with my best friend, I would NEVER forgive him. I would also probably go off on a "I never loved you" rant or something just to piss him off and make him feel guilty. But I suppose Talia is just nicer than me, hehe. Great chapter though =)
I'm kind of mad that Talia forgave Gary so soon. I mean if I found out that my boyfriend stole my diary and slept with my best friend, I would NEVER forgive him. I would also probably go off on a "I never loved you" rant or something just to piss him off and make him feel guilty. But I suppose Talia is just nicer than me, hehe. Great chapter though =)
6/16/2006 c4 free-to-dream15
Exams are done as of yesterday so now I don't have to tell my mom that I'm "studying" and can read! lol the whole Leo thing with the unnamed girl kind of confused me a bit but thats ok! oh no! Gary took the diary! ahh that's going to lead to trouble! update SOON!
Exams are done as of yesterday so now I don't have to tell my mom that I'm "studying" and can read! lol the whole Leo thing with the unnamed girl kind of confused me a bit but thats ok! oh no! Gary took the diary! ahh that's going to lead to trouble! update SOON!