for When The Stars Won't Shine2/6/2013 c2 Rain Man
I think it's good. I dunno, so far.
Yeah.
I think it's good. I dunno, so far.
Yeah.
6/20/2011 c14 
6CrimsonSilence
You built it and built it and built it...then it all faded away. Kinda made me sad. I thought it'd end differently but...it was still a great story, your twist on peter pan.
6CrimsonSilenceYou built it and built it and built it...then it all faded away. Kinda made me sad. I thought it'd end differently but...it was still a great story, your twist on peter pan.
4/8/2011 c14 1Becuziamalive128
I absolutely love this story! I really do. I adore the almost horrorish twist you give on neverland...never again will I wish to be with peter pan. ; )
1Becuziamalive128I absolutely love this story! I really do. I adore the almost horrorish twist you give on neverland...never again will I wish to be with peter pan. ; )
4/13/2010 c14 smileyfox5150
Wow. Simply wow. This is the best peice of liturature I've read in ages. You turly have a way with words, to pull a reader under and into this marvelous world. Please continue. Oh, and one thing: a liittle more description would be nice. as in scenes. Keep it up!
Wow. Simply wow. This is the best peice of liturature I've read in ages. You turly have a way with words, to pull a reader under and into this marvelous world. Please continue. Oh, and one thing: a liittle more description would be nice. as in scenes. Keep it up!
1/31/2010 c14 3Cinnia Aine
This was an amazing story. It kept me guessing, right up until the end. I don't mind that the ending is a bit of a cliffhanger itself. I loved the last line. The thing I liked best, over all, was the poetic and symbolic way in which you wrote the story. I pretty much danced along with the flow of the story. This is one of the best stories that I've read on fiction press (and I've read many) and one of the most thought-provoking Peter Pan stories (of which I've read many as well). It almost reminded me of Karen Wallace's "Wendy" (in a positive way). I hope to have time to read more of your stories in the future. I don't even care if they have extra helpings of angst, 'cause angst isn't necessarily bad. :D
3Cinnia AineThis was an amazing story. It kept me guessing, right up until the end. I don't mind that the ending is a bit of a cliffhanger itself. I loved the last line. The thing I liked best, over all, was the poetic and symbolic way in which you wrote the story. I pretty much danced along with the flow of the story. This is one of the best stories that I've read on fiction press (and I've read many) and one of the most thought-provoking Peter Pan stories (of which I've read many as well). It almost reminded me of Karen Wallace's "Wendy" (in a positive way). I hope to have time to read more of your stories in the future. I don't even care if they have extra helpings of angst, 'cause angst isn't necessarily bad. :D
10/12/2009 c14 Obsession Changes Things
Wait so they never went home, and met up again. This was a really good story but I felt like it could have been way longer with a lot more detail and a happier ending but the funny thing is that I loved it. You have a way of putting a story accross that leaves you wanting more.
~Obsession
Wait so they never went home, and met up again. This was a really good story but I felt like it could have been way longer with a lot more detail and a happier ending but the funny thing is that I loved it. You have a way of putting a story accross that leaves you wanting more.
~Obsession
6/23/2009 c14 6jdilorenzo
Wow.
I just found this and I read it in one sitting!
I loved it!
Anyway I'm a little confused. Does Wendy get home? What about the other Neverlanders? And what does the title represent?
Overall it was a marvelous read. congrats!
6jdilorenzoWow.
I just found this and I read it in one sitting!
I loved it!
Anyway I'm a little confused. Does Wendy get home? What about the other Neverlanders? And what does the title represent?
Overall it was a marvelous read. congrats!
6/7/2009 c14 foohypink
I love it. It was amazing, Great twist of the story. Did Wendy really die? Good jod.
I love it. It was amazing, Great twist of the story. Did Wendy really die? Good jod.
11/22/2008 c14 3megamegaturtle
That was really amazing!
I love how you wrote the story!
But so does that mean that Peter and Andrew went back to their mother?
3megamegaturtleThat was really amazing!
I love how you wrote the story!
But so does that mean that Peter and Andrew went back to their mother?
9/26/2008 c14 Ngoc1231
Wow.. Great story!
It was nice that you switched the good guys and bad.. or well the more good anyway haha.
~*~Ngoc1231~*~
Wow.. Great story!
It was nice that you switched the good guys and bad.. or well the more good anyway haha.
~*~Ngoc1231~*~
6/25/2008 c14 13writtenwordsaremagic
You left me wordless with the ending. The only thing I can say is that this story is amazing. Confusing at times, certainly, but wonderful all the same.
Thank you for writing this.
13writtenwordsaremagicYou left me wordless with the ending. The only thing I can say is that this story is amazing. Confusing at times, certainly, but wonderful all the same.
Thank you for writing this.
6/4/2008 c14 2Hecate's Diamon
Aww! That was kind of sad! But a really well written story. And that last chapter was reminiscient of the book 1984. Don't know if you've ever read it but its basically about how nothing is real. Lol
I really enjoyed this story though. The ending, though, was sad, but I like sad endings because well-done ones are hard to come by. Everyone does the happy ending. To be honest, though, I was kinda hoping for a happy ending to this story. I thought it would be like they all went back to their parents and Wendy and Peter met in real life.
But still this is going on my favourites list :)
2Hecate's DiamonAww! That was kind of sad! But a really well written story. And that last chapter was reminiscient of the book 1984. Don't know if you've ever read it but its basically about how nothing is real. Lol
I really enjoyed this story though. The ending, though, was sad, but I like sad endings because well-done ones are hard to come by. Everyone does the happy ending. To be honest, though, I was kinda hoping for a happy ending to this story. I thought it would be like they all went back to their parents and Wendy and Peter met in real life.
But still this is going on my favourites list :)
3/2/2008 c5 A
The dialogue between Peter and Wendy is so cute. =)
The dialogue between Peter and Wendy is so cute. =)
3/2/2008 c3 A
Oh. Wow. This is. I can't even say anything.
I never really had any feeling towards the story of Peter Pan, only that I was kind of upset that Wendy and Peter never ended up together (I'm a die-hard romantic. I look for romance everywhere), and I'm hoping that this will satisfy my Wendy/Peter craving. =)
Oh. Wow. This is. I can't even say anything.
I never really had any feeling towards the story of Peter Pan, only that I was kind of upset that Wendy and Peter never ended up together (I'm a die-hard romantic. I look for romance everywhere), and I'm hoping that this will satisfy my Wendy/Peter craving. =)