for IM SO SORRY6/13/2006 c1 
2B. N. Ross
You're incredibly immature, and I doubt that even one person forgives you. Your writing needs to be improved, and yet you flame people who are so much better than you for your own kicks. Grow up. If you're jealous, get better, but don't leave your flames lying around everywhere. Oh, and as a side note, when you make an apology don't go insulting other people anyway.
2B. N. RossYou're incredibly immature, and I doubt that even one person forgives you. Your writing needs to be improved, and yet you flame people who are so much better than you for your own kicks. Grow up. If you're jealous, get better, but don't leave your flames lying around everywhere. Oh, and as a side note, when you make an apology don't go insulting other people anyway.
6/13/2006 c1 NoRespectForFlamers
This isn't horror. You're a horror, going around and being mean and nasty to people for no real reason other than to get your kicks. I hope you really are sorry, but this is likely just another ploy for attention like most everything else you do. And about your work here...(because I actually read it and will comment on what you wrote, not just write 'sux' and move on)
1. "for flaming there masterpeices"You meant 'their'
2. "masterpeices i was just bored"There should be a period after masterpieces, which is spelt 'ie' not 'ei' by the way...
3. "My bad...se i have"My bad? Try saying it was a mistake, or it was my fault. 'My bad' is grammatically wrong and just sounds horrible. It should be 'See'not 'se'
4. Laptop is one word
5. It is spelled 'access'
6. Apostrophe between the 'I' and 'm' in Im. It is a shortened form of I am (two words) and therefore needs an apostrophe.
7. "except im not sorry to"This should be a new sentence
8. There should be a period after "Vanilla Lotion"
9. Saying "that sucked hard!" completly ruins your apology. That is simply a flame once again, not constructive critisim. You haven't done anything to help this author, you have only hurt her. You should be even more sorry to her for flaming her work in this place as well and for calling her a bitch simply because you didn't like her work.
10. Apostrophe again between I and m
11. Love you all! not "love yall!"
12. It is spelt Whatever and "Wutever that means!" is not a complete sentence and leaves the reader feeling like nothing you had just said is sincere which defeats the purpose of this whole thing.
Grow up Elizabeth! And for everyone's sake please take your crap off the internet and leave this writing to those of us who actually make an effort to write well.
This isn't horror. You're a horror, going around and being mean and nasty to people for no real reason other than to get your kicks. I hope you really are sorry, but this is likely just another ploy for attention like most everything else you do. And about your work here...(because I actually read it and will comment on what you wrote, not just write 'sux' and move on)
1. "for flaming there masterpeices"You meant 'their'
2. "masterpeices i was just bored"There should be a period after masterpieces, which is spelt 'ie' not 'ei' by the way...
3. "My bad...se i have"My bad? Try saying it was a mistake, or it was my fault. 'My bad' is grammatically wrong and just sounds horrible. It should be 'See'not 'se'
4. Laptop is one word
5. It is spelled 'access'
6. Apostrophe between the 'I' and 'm' in Im. It is a shortened form of I am (two words) and therefore needs an apostrophe.
7. "except im not sorry to"This should be a new sentence
8. There should be a period after "Vanilla Lotion"
9. Saying "that sucked hard!" completly ruins your apology. That is simply a flame once again, not constructive critisim. You haven't done anything to help this author, you have only hurt her. You should be even more sorry to her for flaming her work in this place as well and for calling her a bitch simply because you didn't like her work.
10. Apostrophe again between I and m
11. Love you all! not "love yall!"
12. It is spelt Whatever and "Wutever that means!" is not a complete sentence and leaves the reader feeling like nothing you had just said is sincere which defeats the purpose of this whole thing.
Grow up Elizabeth! And for everyone's sake please take your crap off the internet and leave this writing to those of us who actually make an effort to write well.
6/12/2006 c1 26Meio
That is very immature and stupid of you. I'm sorry you don't have enough respect for yourself or others to actually offer something intellgent to say.
This wasn't a flame, but you really should grow up.
26MeioThat is very immature and stupid of you. I'm sorry you don't have enough respect for yourself or others to actually offer something intellgent to say.
This wasn't a flame, but you really should grow up.
6/12/2006 c1 5Charley Keed
Yeah...I've read some of your flames and for you to say you just write them because they're bored...The thing is most people take what you say about their work to heart and when you make fun of it or insult their stories you really leave a mark. I don't honestly think anyone will accept your apology. At least not when you write it so immaturely-how are they to know whether you're just bored right now? If you're really sorry you'll aplogize individually to all of the authors whom you've flamed in a mature and sincere way. I mean, honestly, do you think anyone is going to forgive you after ending your "IM SO SORRY" with a joke? Seriously. I'm only a few years older than you, and I have no trouble acting my age. Thank you for your time.
5Charley KeedYeah...I've read some of your flames and for you to say you just write them because they're bored...The thing is most people take what you say about their work to heart and when you make fun of it or insult their stories you really leave a mark. I don't honestly think anyone will accept your apology. At least not when you write it so immaturely-how are they to know whether you're just bored right now? If you're really sorry you'll aplogize individually to all of the authors whom you've flamed in a mature and sincere way. I mean, honestly, do you think anyone is going to forgive you after ending your "IM SO SORRY" with a joke? Seriously. I'm only a few years older than you, and I have no trouble acting my age. Thank you for your time.
6/11/2006 c1 6GothicKitsune666
umm that made no since what-so-ever! You flame things when your bored? that is just stupid.
6GothicKitsune666umm that made no since what-so-ever! You flame things when your bored? that is just stupid.
6/11/2006 c1 3Elochai
First thing - Whether or not you're sorry or bored is not the issue. You posted this in a fiction section, where people expect to read stories and other such fictional works of some, if debatable, value. This does not constitute the above.Secondly - The fact that you seek to slander others simply because you're bored doesn't make it right or make your apology worth anything.Thirdly - I really hope you take down this and your other stories that are well... Stupid/Out of place/Mean Nothing. As well as your flame reviews.
3ElochaiFirst thing - Whether or not you're sorry or bored is not the issue. You posted this in a fiction section, where people expect to read stories and other such fictional works of some, if debatable, value. This does not constitute the above.Secondly - The fact that you seek to slander others simply because you're bored doesn't make it right or make your apology worth anything.Thirdly - I really hope you take down this and your other stories that are well... Stupid/Out of place/Mean Nothing. As well as your flame reviews.
6/10/2006 c1 21Peregrin Chopkins
... So, you just flame people when you're bored? Don't you think that's a little immature?
21Peregrin Chopkins... So, you just flame people when you're bored? Don't you think that's a little immature?