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6/15/2006 c1 youknowme
i am very impressed by what you are writing down in this poem, the "beat of her heart" thing is definately what makes this poem go so very deep below your skin. also the visuality of your poems is extremely impressive and creates images for every line you wrote in my head. and that, in my opinion makes the perfect poem!
6/12/2006 c1 38xRayne
Wow, I really liked how powerful these words were. Do write more. One thing though: there are a few grammatical errors, you might want to watch that in the future.

-Ladicius Rayne
6/12/2006 c1 81Princess-anna57
I'm speechless.

This is excellent. Do post more!

Write on!

~Anna~

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