for One Week Lost6/24/2006 c1 
871no.peace.los.angeles
A few small details: I would put a space between "abranch" and "alonely." Just because they're separate words. I don't know if you did that on purpose or what. Anyway, yeah, I really like that image of you sitting on a tree looking for your lost love. For some reason, it reminds me of Little Bo Peep, as strange as that sounds. The amputated arms line is very odd. I'm not sure how much I like it. Keep writing! :)
871no.peace.los.angelesA few small details: I would put a space between "abranch" and "alonely." Just because they're separate words. I don't know if you did that on purpose or what. Anyway, yeah, I really like that image of you sitting on a tree looking for your lost love. For some reason, it reminds me of Little Bo Peep, as strange as that sounds. The amputated arms line is very odd. I'm not sure how much I like it. Keep writing! :)
6/14/2006 c1 70elvenstorm
This is so sad and ever so slightly strange, for example the arms amputated line. Lots of images spring from this poem such as the whole being lost sitting on a tree. Interesting well done x
70elvenstormThis is so sad and ever so slightly strange, for example the arms amputated line. Lots of images spring from this poem such as the whole being lost sitting on a tree. Interesting well done x
6/12/2006 c1 30Southern Fantasy
wow that's so sad but i love it! awesome work i loved ur ryhming..keep it uP! God Bless ya love Juliet
30Southern Fantasywow that's so sad but i love it! awesome work i loved ur ryhming..keep it uP! God Bless ya love Juliet