for A Fine Line12/14/2017 c1 Ugh
This is terrible
How can you create a such non realistic brat.
What sixteen year old walks into an office, barging in, possibly destructive and making random demands.
The insolence annoyed me. The situation was stupid. Plainly stupid
I'm sorry but this is a pathetic attempt at drama I couldn't make it past the second chapter.
And also why are there so many traces of abuse everywhere here
The first two chapters are disappointing af.
You've probably lost will to complete this story cos it's shit.
This is terrible
How can you create a such non realistic brat.
What sixteen year old walks into an office, barging in, possibly destructive and making random demands.
The insolence annoyed me. The situation was stupid. Plainly stupid
I'm sorry but this is a pathetic attempt at drama I couldn't make it past the second chapter.
And also why are there so many traces of abuse everywhere here
The first two chapters are disappointing af.
You've probably lost will to complete this story cos it's shit.
8/6/2013 c9 xD
I hope Mia and Stephan don't get together...
I hope Mia and Stephan don't get together...
3/2/2013 c14 chibi-Clar
I love it!
It's awesome! Update! Please!
Oh my! What with Stephen do when he finds out about the uncle!
Who will she confy in first ? Best friend ? Boyfriend ? Future lover?
I love it!
It's awesome! Update! Please!
Oh my! What with Stephen do when he finds out about the uncle!
Who will she confy in first ? Best friend ? Boyfriend ? Future lover?
3/2/2013 c14 Guest
I love it!
I love it!
4/25/2012 c14 Mer Princess
This is story had me laughing since the very beginning.
Very well written and always had me wanted for more.
The humor throughout the story almost got me in trouble a few times since I was trying not to laugh in the quiet area of the public library.
I hope you return to this story and some day finish it because the way it was written seems so real that it could possibly be happening right now.
Thank you for writing and I hope your inspiration for this story returns soon.
4/25/12
This is story had me laughing since the very beginning.
Very well written and always had me wanted for more.
The humor throughout the story almost got me in trouble a few times since I was trying not to laugh in the quiet area of the public library.
I hope you return to this story and some day finish it because the way it was written seems so real that it could possibly be happening right now.
Thank you for writing and I hope your inspiration for this story returns soon.
4/25/12
10/23/2010 c14 spiderbabe
You would be too cruel to discontinue this story! I used to read it when I was in high school, but you updated so infrequently that I stopped and then completely forgot about it.
But lately I'd been having these errant memories about it that I had to check up on it - and I'm quite sad that it's not complete yet.
So please, please update! This story is hauntingly good! =)
You would be too cruel to discontinue this story! I used to read it when I was in high school, but you updated so infrequently that I stopped and then completely forgot about it.
But lately I'd been having these errant memories about it that I had to check up on it - and I'm quite sad that it's not complete yet.
So please, please update! This story is hauntingly good! =)
6/1/2010 c14 AlexionMichaelis
I really do love your story! Please update soon! :D
I enjoy how you take your time to build the relationships between the characters and not rush into things that a lot of authors tend to do. :)
I really do love your story! Please update soon! :D
I enjoy how you take your time to build the relationships between the characters and not rush into things that a lot of authors tend to do. :)
4/12/2010 c14 Chocorange888
I would just like to say that I absolutely adore your story, but I noticed that it hasn't been updated in a while. I hope when you get enough time, you would update it. Thank you.
I would just like to say that I absolutely adore your story, but I noticed that it hasn't been updated in a while. I hope when you get enough time, you would update it. Thank you.
12/1/2009 c14 Buhbyesuckers
Hi there!
Just want to say, I've been a silent reader and managed to find this story again! I hope you update soon, it's really good!
Hi there!
Just want to say, I've been a silent reader and managed to find this story again! I hope you update soon, it's really good!
9/15/2009 c14 
16MadameLeQueen
oh god this story is addicting(:
I couldn't stop reading it, haha.
I absolutely LOVE Mia's attitude and personality x)
16MadameLeQueenoh god this story is addicting(:
I couldn't stop reading it, haha.
I absolutely LOVE Mia's attitude and personality x)
8/25/2009 c14 4Misplaced Angel
This is one of the best stories i have ever read. Seriously, I /love/ it! Mia is such a unique chcracter... tho the plot is getting a tad predictable... I love Stephen tho, he sounds yummy.
How have you not updated in so long? Please please update soon! ^^
Ta!
M.Angel
4Misplaced AngelThis is one of the best stories i have ever read. Seriously, I /love/ it! Mia is such a unique chcracter... tho the plot is getting a tad predictable... I love Stephen tho, he sounds yummy.
How have you not updated in so long? Please please update soon! ^^
Ta!
M.Angel
6/27/2009 c1 4Sweet-Loop
I am really into this story, but I'm getting really antsy because YOU WON'T UPDATE! I really love your characters, you've given this story a lot of depth, and the plot is very original.
BUT PLEAASSE UPDATE!
4Sweet-LoopI am really into this story, but I'm getting really antsy because YOU WON'T UPDATE! I really love your characters, you've given this story a lot of depth, and the plot is very original.
BUT PLEAASSE UPDATE!