for Inside, Looking Out12/7/2006 c2 
8Meldon
Very interesting :D
"Decipher clearly" hehe. Great oxymoron ^_^
~Meldon
PS: R&R my stories? Right now I am writing an epic poem ("Edopan e'Vrechi") and I also have a complete story called "Tori's Gift" and an incomplete essay "The Art of Conlanging".
8MeldonVery interesting :D
"Decipher clearly" hehe. Great oxymoron ^_^
~Meldon
PS: R&R my stories? Right now I am writing an epic poem ("Edopan e'Vrechi") and I also have a complete story called "Tori's Gift" and an incomplete essay "The Art of Conlanging".
11/5/2006 c5 11Torn and Tattered
Yup, i like the name odette... but my sister has watched "Barbie as the Princes of Swan Lake" whatever (dunno the name, don't really care; no offense to Barbie lovers) it just like, oh, it's Odette and i try to shake the instant image of the Barbie blonde in my head. Lol, keep going, plz update soon!
*TAD*Phoenix Keeper
11Torn and TatteredYup, i like the name odette... but my sister has watched "Barbie as the Princes of Swan Lake" whatever (dunno the name, don't really care; no offense to Barbie lovers) it just like, oh, it's Odette and i try to shake the instant image of the Barbie blonde in my head. Lol, keep going, plz update soon!
*TAD*Phoenix Keeper
11/5/2006 c4 Torn and Tattered
a WAR council? geez whoa, that'd be sweet to see. and i'm glad you made the woman have some authority. that's sweet (i'm a girl so you can consder why I'm happy about it) so yup, thank u for posting this up.
*TAD* Phoenix Keeper
a WAR council? geez whoa, that'd be sweet to see. and i'm glad you made the woman have some authority. that's sweet (i'm a girl so you can consder why I'm happy about it) so yup, thank u for posting this up.
*TAD* Phoenix Keeper
11/5/2006 c3 Torn and Tattered
my server is funny and keeps freezing so i kept loosing my place. i haven't restarted the comp in ages but... ur supposed to do it every week or so. well it was an inventive chapter with the same pure description. i liked it lots ^^!
*TAD* Phoenix Keeper
my server is funny and keeps freezing so i kept loosing my place. i haven't restarted the comp in ages but... ur supposed to do it every week or so. well it was an inventive chapter with the same pure description. i liked it lots ^^!
*TAD* Phoenix Keeper
11/5/2006 c2 Torn and Tattered
Nice beginning chapter. Well described and has a good balance. It seems like a good plot.
*TAD* Phonix Keeper
Nice beginning chapter. Well described and has a good balance. It seems like a good plot.
*TAD* Phonix Keeper
11/5/2006 c1 Torn and Tattered
one of ur friends recommended you... Silvery Darkness i believe. She recommeded ur story inone of my forums. I liked the first chapter, very descriptive and it make me want to read more... which i will. Lol.
*TAD* Phoenix Keeper
one of ur friends recommended you... Silvery Darkness i believe. She recommeded ur story inone of my forums. I liked the first chapter, very descriptive and it make me want to read more... which i will. Lol.
*TAD* Phoenix Keeper
8/6/2006 c5 2Chelseamuffin
Heehee, j'ai liked it ^^ Go you guys! (Again.) And yeah. Again, a few typos, and changing of the verb tenses, but it was still a good chapter :) YAY! Heehee, uh... well, Chelsea is off to do something, then.
2ChelseamuffinHeehee, j'ai liked it ^^ Go you guys! (Again.) And yeah. Again, a few typos, and changing of the verb tenses, but it was still a good chapter :) YAY! Heehee, uh... well, Chelsea is off to do something, then.
8/6/2006 c4 Chelseamuffin
OMG! YOU LIVE! TWO UPDATES! *CHOKEGASPDIE* IT'S A MIRACLE! YAY! (Yes, I'm hyper. Sh.) Well, I noticed a typo or two, but not very many-GO YOU GUYS! And yeah. I'm off to the next chapter, I guess.
OMG! YOU LIVE! TWO UPDATES! *CHOKEGASPDIE* IT'S A MIRACLE! YAY! (Yes, I'm hyper. Sh.) Well, I noticed a typo or two, but not very many-GO YOU GUYS! And yeah. I'm off to the next chapter, I guess.
8/5/2006 c4 138simply meg
lol, love it. but It still sounds too mcuh like Tamora Pierce... like "She was tall with long, light red-blonde hair. She had an attitude that made it seem like she had to be the person in charge, but she also seemed like a person who you’d want to be in charge." umm, remind you of anyone?
138simply meglol, love it. but It still sounds too mcuh like Tamora Pierce... like "She was tall with long, light red-blonde hair. She had an attitude that made it seem like she had to be the person in charge, but she also seemed like a person who you’d want to be in charge." umm, remind you of anyone?
7/15/2006 c3 Vero
O MI GOSH! =) Like Bestest N Fanciest Story! O Do Write More My Beloved Friends I Beg Of You If You Dont Ill Go To Megans House With A Shovel...*smiles evily* so keep writing because i SHALL RETURN!...im creepy aint i =Plots of luv to u guys!V
O MI GOSH! =) Like Bestest N Fanciest Story! O Do Write More My Beloved Friends I Beg Of You If You Dont Ill Go To Megans House With A Shovel...*smiles evily* so keep writing because i SHALL RETURN!...im creepy aint i =Plots of luv to u guys!V
6/14/2006 c3 2Chelseamuffin
Great chapter! Heh, I KNOW WHY FERRIS IS BEING SO NOT NICE TO HER! But I shall never tell! Yes, I feel very special... ANYWAY! This was good, but I noticed a few typos... although I can't point them out, I forgot where they were as I went along ^^; SORRY! I'll point 'em out next time... Or later, I guess.
Right, well, GO YOU GUYS! HA! See ya'll tomorrow! (YES, I said ya'll ^^)
2ChelseamuffinGreat chapter! Heh, I KNOW WHY FERRIS IS BEING SO NOT NICE TO HER! But I shall never tell! Yes, I feel very special... ANYWAY! This was good, but I noticed a few typos... although I can't point them out, I forgot where they were as I went along ^^; SORRY! I'll point 'em out next time... Or later, I guess.
Right, well, GO YOU GUYS! HA! See ya'll tomorrow! (YES, I said ya'll ^^)
6/14/2006 c2 Chelseamuffin
Lol, love the description of the whores ^^ It was very amusing... And what the natives said, LOL.
Anyway, heh. Off topic, go me. Right, so, good chapter, you guys! Me liked... a lot ^^ Well, now, I'm onto the next chapter!
Lol, love the description of the whores ^^ It was very amusing... And what the natives said, LOL.
Anyway, heh. Off topic, go me. Right, so, good chapter, you guys! Me liked... a lot ^^ Well, now, I'm onto the next chapter!
6/14/2006 c1 Chelseamuffin
Lol, I remember the planning of this... With Sam come back straight from dancing in the garbage can ^^; Good times, ne?
Anyway, YAY! You guys posted it! And I like it so far o.O Very good beginning... I KNOW WHO THAT WAS XD
Lol, anyway, onto the next chapter now.
Lol, I remember the planning of this... With Sam come back straight from dancing in the garbage can ^^; Good times, ne?
Anyway, YAY! You guys posted it! And I like it so far o.O Very good beginning... I KNOW WHO THAT WAS XD
Lol, anyway, onto the next chapter now.