6/14/2006 c1 14method acting
Excellent last bit. The formatting was interesting, how you broke the sentences and all of that. 'Time and time again, I break my feet,
just for you to mold again.'
Just for you to mold THEM again? Or are you speaking in a larger sense, of the subject's emotional structure? I like this piece. There are many questions like that. I like being able to make something different of it. Super job. Last lines, really phenomenal.
Excellent last bit. The formatting was interesting, how you broke the sentences and all of that. 'Time and time again, I break my feet,
just for you to mold again.'
Just for you to mold THEM again? Or are you speaking in a larger sense, of the subject's emotional structure? I like this piece. There are many questions like that. I like being able to make something different of it. Super job. Last lines, really phenomenal.