for Musings6/29/2006 c1 Empty Tranquility
Whoa. That's REALLY deep. I really like it though. Good work.
(P.S - Thanks for the tips. I really appreciate them.)
Whoa. That's REALLY deep. I really like it though. Good work.
(P.S - Thanks for the tips. I really appreciate them.)
6/15/2006 c1 
38plummet
You know, that's a very interesting thought. I never really considered poetry being a direct window to the soul. I mean, I've always known poetry to be the deepest expression of feeling possibly, but...I liked this. The only thing I could even think of criticizing on would be when you had a period in a line and continued on with another thought anyway. It doesn't read badly, however, so I guess you're alright with that. =)
~Write on!
38plummetYou know, that's a very interesting thought. I never really considered poetry being a direct window to the soul. I mean, I've always known poetry to be the deepest expression of feeling possibly, but...I liked this. The only thing I could even think of criticizing on would be when you had a period in a line and continued on with another thought anyway. It doesn't read badly, however, so I guess you're alright with that. =)
~Write on!