for Dance At Every Wedding6/18/2006 c1 
53AchtungBabyAchtung
gasp! thievery! heh, just kidding. i love it anyway, and yay! because you posted! iz xx
53AchtungBabyAchtunggasp! thievery! heh, just kidding. i love it anyway, and yay! because you posted! iz xx
6/16/2006 c1 30lady-in-the-mirror
"Gem of Red in case of stone.
Drips down icy cheek,
Melting helplessly."
DEFINATELY YOUR BEST POEM EVER. Its so lovely! It conjures up such images... A grieving grandmother who never joins in the celebrations...I LOVE IT!
30lady-in-the-mirror"Gem of Red in case of stone.
Drips down icy cheek,
Melting helplessly."
DEFINATELY YOUR BEST POEM EVER. Its so lovely! It conjures up such images... A grieving grandmother who never joins in the celebrations...I LOVE IT!
6/15/2006 c1 hello
oh new poem! yay! i love it, it's too sad (in a gd way) and the rhyming's really good cos it doesnt seem forced at all. im not entirely sure i understand it, but i sort of do. lovely anyway. x
oh new poem! yay! i love it, it's too sad (in a gd way) and the rhyming's really good cos it doesnt seem forced at all. im not entirely sure i understand it, but i sort of do. lovely anyway. x
6/15/2006 c1 29Scrunchy
Excellent. And so sad. Read it through about 4 times so far, it's really good. A little abstract, but I think I can see a meaning there. Brilliantly done =)
It's been a while since you've put up anything new, so this was a nice surprise =D
Keep going :)
Scrunchy x
29ScrunchyExcellent. And so sad. Read it through about 4 times so far, it's really good. A little abstract, but I think I can see a meaning there. Brilliantly done =)
It's been a while since you've put up anything new, so this was a nice surprise =D
Keep going :)
Scrunchy x
6/14/2006 c1 30Southern Fantasy
i have never read a poem quite like this..i applaoud u on such a wonderful job! i loved it so much i'm addin it to my fav list! u did so fabulous on it i'm at a lost for words to tell you good job lol keep it up! God Bless ya love Juliet
30Southern Fantasyi have never read a poem quite like this..i applaoud u on such a wonderful job! i loved it so much i'm addin it to my fav list! u did so fabulous on it i'm at a lost for words to tell you good job lol keep it up! God Bless ya love Juliet