for Thirteenth Floor Guys1/14/2012 c13 
1NeonTime
I doubt this was the ending you had planned but as the only one us readers have it is more than enough. Thanks for writing such a lovely story.
1NeonTimeI doubt this was the ending you had planned but as the only one us readers have it is more than enough. Thanks for writing such a lovely story.
7/2/2009 c13 2WhistlingPekoe
That was really adorable! The characters were great - FP is severely lacking in likeable, non-bitchy female main characters, but Thea's making up for that. Fallon's great.
I also like how you wrote the sex scene - oftentimes, authors make it too graphic and long, but you got the point across without overdoing it. It was sweet.
Now off to check your profile for any other stories!
2WhistlingPekoeThat was really adorable! The characters were great - FP is severely lacking in likeable, non-bitchy female main characters, but Thea's making up for that. Fallon's great.
I also like how you wrote the sex scene - oftentimes, authors make it too graphic and long, but you got the point across without overdoing it. It was sweet.
Now off to check your profile for any other stories!
6/14/2009 c13 2I Will Not Die I Will Survive
i love this story why did you stop updating, please get back to the this story its great, i want to know wat happens when the family finds out and when there friends find out, please get back to this story its awesome
2I Will Not Die I Will Survivei love this story why did you stop updating, please get back to the this story its great, i want to know wat happens when the family finds out and when there friends find out, please get back to this story its awesome
8/15/2008 c13 2EeeNAce
way awesome. I love it. I love all your characters and the dynamics in the interaction is amazing. Your writing style is great and even though I usually don't like alternating points of view, you've definitely done a good job with it. Kudos =D Update soon!
2EeeNAceway awesome. I love it. I love all your characters and the dynamics in the interaction is amazing. Your writing style is great and even though I usually don't like alternating points of view, you've definitely done a good job with it. Kudos =D Update soon!
5/20/2008 c12 Trory4ever
i really like this story, i cant wait to see what is going to happen next. please update soon! great job!
Michelle
i really like this story, i cant wait to see what is going to happen next. please update soon! great job!
Michelle
1/29/2008 c13 toazdo
I love this story! Fallon and Thea are so cute together! But not to a sickening degree which is good..
Can't wait to read more..I wan tot see who's going to win the bet and the three grand =)
I love this story! Fallon and Thea are so cute together! But not to a sickening degree which is good..
Can't wait to read more..I wan tot see who's going to win the bet and the three grand =)
8/19/2007 c13 1victim of reality88
AW how cute.They finally got together. Took them long enough. Anyways im really liking this story. so PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!
1victim of reality88AW how cute.They finally got together. Took them long enough. Anyways im really liking this story. so PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!
6/28/2007 c4 CHIIJOY
AHSH!
when she told him that she loved him it was so ironic because she sorta does and it was so relate-able since i had those sorta ironic moments.
anywhos, i'm going to read more now. :)
AHSH!
when she told him that she loved him it was so ironic because she sorta does and it was so relate-able since i had those sorta ironic moments.
anywhos, i'm going to read more now. :)
5/11/2007 c13 1kimlen
Finally, the two of them are together. I like they way this story is playing out, it's well written two. please update!
1kimlenFinally, the two of them are together. I like they way this story is playing out, it's well written two. please update!
4/12/2007 c13 Lauren
I LOVE THIS STORY. :]
keep updating please.
i kept getting the chills when i read it.
I LOVE THIS STORY. :]
keep updating please.
i kept getting the chills when i read it.
4/5/2007 c13 1dreamtaker
Hey! Nice last two chapters! I'm definitely sticking to your story. Can't wait what happens.
1dreamtakerHey! Nice last two chapters! I'm definitely sticking to your story. Can't wait what happens.
3/6/2007 c13 9Lady Wolfine
Fine Then. Leave us poor readers dangling by a very thin, streched out cord, about to fall to our deaths until you update. Just kidding. I love Thea and Fallon!
And what a Christmas present for the family...
9Lady WolfineFine Then. Leave us poor readers dangling by a very thin, streched out cord, about to fall to our deaths until you update. Just kidding. I love Thea and Fallon!
And what a Christmas present for the family...