for The Curse of Millard Center7/11/2006 c2 
73An Inside Joke
Nicky's first conversation with Katriel doesn't seem very realistic. So, Sister Justina has control over her students on the weekends, even though they live with their parents? That doesn't seem right.
73An Inside JokeNicky's first conversation with Katriel doesn't seem very realistic. So, Sister Justina has control over her students on the weekends, even though they live with their parents? That doesn't seem right.
7/9/2006 c1 An Inside Joke
Nice start. It's interesting that Faith accepted teh woman's word over the word that teh house wasn't a scam- if it was a scam, they wouldn't admit to it, would they? Anyway, interesting first chapter, you've caught my attention!
Nice start. It's interesting that Faith accepted teh woman's word over the word that teh house wasn't a scam- if it was a scam, they wouldn't admit to it, would they? Anyway, interesting first chapter, you've caught my attention!