for One Night4/16/2017 c1 
3herondalechick123
Amazing story! It was short and sweet but I kind of wished it was longer though. Can't wait to read more of your stories :)
3herondalechick123Amazing story! It was short and sweet but I kind of wished it was longer though. Can't wait to read more of your stories :)
4/12/2017 c15 Guest
The story is sweet and short.A great story,well too cliché it is just right .
The story is sweet and short.A great story,well too cliché it is just right .
2/27/2017 c1 crazy lion
Hi Lauren! I've just found your story. It took my attention since I read the plot. The first chapter is a presentation of James and I have to admit that, in a certain way, I'm like him. Many times I prefer to be alone. I have some friends, but many times loneliness is my friend. This seems like sad, but although once it was so, for me, now I have larnt that being lonely helps me doing things I didn't do before, like writing for example. I say this because i think that James, too, loves to be alone. He is accostumed to it. He isn't sad when he is alone, no, he is happy! I love reading stories when a character likes writing, because I feel like him in this sense, too.
Talking about te fact that James didn't want do be helped by his friend when his mother died... well, I know by my experience that there are some people (like me for example) who have to be alone when a person dies, who pretend to be so, because they don't want to share their pain with others. But I think James went wrong, because he didn't talk to her friend about his grief, even when some time had passed from his mother's death. Well, in my opinion, this is not a so good behavior. it hurts James not to talk about his grief, surely.
Great story so far.
crazy lion (my real name is Giulia)
Hi Lauren! I've just found your story. It took my attention since I read the plot. The first chapter is a presentation of James and I have to admit that, in a certain way, I'm like him. Many times I prefer to be alone. I have some friends, but many times loneliness is my friend. This seems like sad, but although once it was so, for me, now I have larnt that being lonely helps me doing things I didn't do before, like writing for example. I say this because i think that James, too, loves to be alone. He is accostumed to it. He isn't sad when he is alone, no, he is happy! I love reading stories when a character likes writing, because I feel like him in this sense, too.
Talking about te fact that James didn't want do be helped by his friend when his mother died... well, I know by my experience that there are some people (like me for example) who have to be alone when a person dies, who pretend to be so, because they don't want to share their pain with others. But I think James went wrong, because he didn't talk to her friend about his grief, even when some time had passed from his mother's death. Well, in my opinion, this is not a so good behavior. it hurts James not to talk about his grief, surely.
Great story so far.
crazy lion (my real name is Giulia)
7/30/2016 c15 Chimel321
Dear Lauren, I have read all of your stories now and they are really reeeeaaallly good.I hope you haven't stopped writing on fiction press as it has been a long time since you updated more stories. I love your work and I hope you continue to post more stories. Ps- your stories were one of the very first ones I read in fiction press and they are still by far my favourite. PLEASE UPDATE SOON
Dear Lauren, I have read all of your stories now and they are really reeeeaaallly good.I hope you haven't stopped writing on fiction press as it has been a long time since you updated more stories. I love your work and I hope you continue to post more stories. Ps- your stories were one of the very first ones I read in fiction press and they are still by far my favourite. PLEASE UPDATE SOON
6/1/2016 c15 Guest
That was a sweet story... Really loved it
That was a sweet story... Really loved it
5/6/2016 c10 mgaa
ooh she's just adorable...and there's a five year gap...wow okay she managed to keep it from him that long
ooh she's just adorable...and there's a five year gap...wow okay she managed to keep it from him that long
5/6/2016 c6 mgaa
omg,,,I stopped breathing..i just read through the rest after the clinic...I even dropped my chopsticks in my chips...I really thought she went through with it...gaaawd..just soo glad she didn't...I know it's very difficult for them but I'm still glad
omg,,,I stopped breathing..i just read through the rest after the clinic...I even dropped my chopsticks in my chips...I really thought she went through with it...gaaawd..just soo glad she didn't...I know it's very difficult for them but I'm still glad
11/4/2015 c3 2auroraglider
You didn't waste any time. That was hot, hot, hot! I had to stop and catch my own breath. Lol. You dd an excellent job writing that intimate scene. Great chapter
2auroragliderYou didn't waste any time. That was hot, hot, hot! I had to stop and catch my own breath. Lol. You dd an excellent job writing that intimate scene. Great chapter
11/4/2015 c2 auroraglider
I like your chapters so far. It seems like an interesting storyline. On to the next chapter.
I like your chapters so far. It seems like an interesting storyline. On to the next chapter.
7/28/2015 c6 Guest
Thank you so much for not going with the abortion thing. I am very Pro-Life and I wouldve been heartbroken if she had gotten an abortion.
Thank you so much for not going with the abortion thing. I am very Pro-Life and I wouldve been heartbroken if she had gotten an abortion.
9/9/2014 c15 Guest
THIS WAS THE MOST ... AMAZING HEARTWARMING TEAR JERKING BEAUTIFUL STORY I'VE EVER EVER EVER! READ THERE SHOULD BE A SEQUEL
THIS WAS THE MOST ... AMAZING HEARTWARMING TEAR JERKING BEAUTIFUL STORY I'VE EVER EVER EVER! READ THERE SHOULD BE A SEQUEL
9/7/2014 c15 BlackHare9
This was one of the few stories about teenage pregnancy that I really liked. It was so sweet.
This was one of the few stories about teenage pregnancy that I really liked. It was so sweet.