for One Night12/6/2009 c15 ghurl00
I love the storyline of this story. It's awesome by the way. You should've added more drama.:) But anyway, great story! Well done!:)
I love the storyline of this story. It's awesome by the way. You should've added more drama.:) But anyway, great story! Well done!:)
12/2/2009 c15 dwpea
so utterly adorable. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story! It was a little rushed, nevertheless..amazing!
so utterly adorable. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story! It was a little rushed, nevertheless..amazing!
11/20/2009 c15 Winterhart
Wow! This was absolutely amazing. After I read the first chapter I was hooked and had to read to the end. You are an amazing author, and the relationship between James and Rachel was beautiful. Thank you for posting this, it was an absolute pleasure to read.
Wow! This was absolutely amazing. After I read the first chapter I was hooked and had to read to the end. You are an amazing author, and the relationship between James and Rachel was beautiful. Thank you for posting this, it was an absolute pleasure to read.
11/1/2009 c15 
3Katie Valentine
Sweet, sorta rushed ending.. But ehh, I enjoyed reading it anywho.. :D
3Katie ValentineSweet, sorta rushed ending.. But ehh, I enjoyed reading it anywho.. :D
10/31/2009 c15 1ParaKisu21
Overall a good story. I liked James, but it would have been really nifty if we got to see from his perspective.
1ParaKisu21Overall a good story. I liked James, but it would have been really nifty if we got to see from his perspective.
10/26/2009 c14 1Hawaiianlover
OEmmGee ,
i love this story , !
I like how James came BACK!
& the part where he saw his daughter in the bookstore was making my heart race like no other. I mean I already knew that he was going to find out sooner or later, but i mean... Wow! & i can't believe that he went back with Rachel... Wait. that is a lie. He loves her & Etc. So i could believe. l0l. Any ways, i read this story in a DAY!
Good job makingg it (;
Anna sounds cutee.
1HawaiianloverOEmmGee ,
i love this story , !
I like how James came BACK!
& the part where he saw his daughter in the bookstore was making my heart race like no other. I mean I already knew that he was going to find out sooner or later, but i mean... Wow! & i can't believe that he went back with Rachel... Wait. that is a lie. He loves her & Etc. So i could believe. l0l. Any ways, i read this story in a DAY!
Good job makingg it (;
Anna sounds cutee.
10/6/2009 c15 3XxAmanda Is A Jasper's GirlxX
aww that was an adorable story. James sounds really hot XD lol. I like it and it was very well written. I hope you are one of the lucky ones and someone wants this published because it is amazing!
3XxAmanda Is A Jasper's GirlxXaww that was an adorable story. James sounds really hot XD lol. I like it and it was very well written. I hope you are one of the lucky ones and someone wants this published because it is amazing!
9/6/2009 c15 CharlotteBradhadair
i really loved it! i think that Rachel did do the right thing though
charlotte
i really loved it! i think that Rachel did do the right thing though
charlotte