1/4/2019 c20 Erisah Mae
It's been at least ten years since I read this last, but I was reminded of a line from it the other day and decided to give it a nostalgia read. Held up better than I expected considering some of the other stuff I was reading at the time so kudos. :)
It's been at least ten years since I read this last, but I was reminded of a line from it the other day and decided to give it a nostalgia read. Held up better than I expected considering some of the other stuff I was reading at the time so kudos. :)
7/9/2018 c20 13Shailaputri
It is a good read..But why all the vamp stories depict the lead male character as 100 years old. That doesn't fit well with me I think..
It is a good read..But why all the vamp stories depict the lead male character as 100 years old. That doesn't fit well with me I think..
12/6/2017 c20 Acie
Haha I love this so much!
Haha I love this so much!
2/29/2016 c11 slcjnk2008
This is a great story. I love how you have written Marla's and Callum's relationship. And now with her mother showing up its just brilliant.
This is a great story. I love how you have written Marla's and Callum's relationship. And now with her mother showing up its just brilliant.
2/13/2015 c20 Guest
Best ending ever! Lol the finger
Best ending ever! Lol the finger
8/11/2014 c1 marta.ador
Hi! Your story has been added to the Supernatural/Fantasy category on A Drop Of Romeo :) Here's your review:
Lulai, the extremely talented author of 'The V Word', manages to captivate and impress once again in 'W is for WHAT?' The storyline is extremely engaging - full of twists and excitement - but what really carries forward the tale are the characters.
Marla, the main character, is a slightly cynical, slightly insecure girl who isn't afraid to express her opinion. Her insights are funny, caustic and fun to follow. Callum is a perfectly well written male character, which allowed him be more than just a romantic interest, but an actual charismatic person. The minor characters, such as Jason, Marla's parents, Kate and Damien, were all unique and distinct.
This allowed me to become fully invested in this story and the romance it presented - to the point where I'd go back and re-read a chapter a couple of times because it was just so good.
Hi! Your story has been added to the Supernatural/Fantasy category on A Drop Of Romeo :) Here's your review:
Lulai, the extremely talented author of 'The V Word', manages to captivate and impress once again in 'W is for WHAT?' The storyline is extremely engaging - full of twists and excitement - but what really carries forward the tale are the characters.
Marla, the main character, is a slightly cynical, slightly insecure girl who isn't afraid to express her opinion. Her insights are funny, caustic and fun to follow. Callum is a perfectly well written male character, which allowed him be more than just a romantic interest, but an actual charismatic person. The minor characters, such as Jason, Marla's parents, Kate and Damien, were all unique and distinct.
This allowed me to become fully invested in this story and the romance it presented - to the point where I'd go back and re-read a chapter a couple of times because it was just so good.
2/11/2014 c20 Dominique Diane
This story made me cry in some parts, she was a girl so sad until she met him! I think my favorite part was when she got hum out of the tree and then discovered the were soul mates. Awesome plot!
This story made me cry in some parts, she was a girl so sad until she met him! I think my favorite part was when she got hum out of the tree and then discovered the were soul mates. Awesome plot!
8/19/2013 c2 Wickedforlife
Woah! I love the tree idea its so cool
Woah! I love the tree idea its so cool
1/2/2013 c20 CaliGurl2007
This is my favorite book out of the series you have. I love Callum and Marla.
This is my favorite book out of the series you have. I love Callum and Marla.
11/11/2012 c2 6Blonde.Ambitions
It's really weird, but Marla is basically exactly like me...but without the cool thought thing...
It's really weird, but Marla is basically exactly like me...but without the cool thought thing...
9/27/2012 c20 4F.H.W
This is so super cute! Its as fluffy as a fluffy white cloud in the big bright blue sky:)
The plot is also quite interesting and the characters were portrayed and developed really well. I really like the cliche of it but i would have liked more about the bitch catfights of Marla and Cindi and more about the tree stuff cos thats not something i usually read about. But overall, awesome story and thanks for writing:)
This is so super cute! Its as fluffy as a fluffy white cloud in the big bright blue sky:)
The plot is also quite interesting and the characters were portrayed and developed really well. I really like the cliche of it but i would have liked more about the bitch catfights of Marla and Cindi and more about the tree stuff cos thats not something i usually read about. But overall, awesome story and thanks for writing:)
8/29/2012 c10 anonny
I like this story signficantly less than "The V word", but I have to say that both really bothered me. I hate the way the female protagonists don't have any real agency, and that their concerns/issues are never really treated as valid, even by their supposed "soulmates"! OF COURSE Marla would be freaked out by the prospect of being bound to someone she's only known for a few days. Anyone would. But rather than give her space/take her seriously, Callum-and, by extension, you as the author-seem to take this "well...get over it," approach that really annoys me, as a reader. I didn't see anything romantic about the way Callum responded with that whole "we're soulmates deal with it" and I really don't like how she is made to feel foolish and bad for how she feels. The same things were in the V word but were less bothersome due to the fact it wasn't as rushed. Tl;dr: "I'm hot and wanna have sex with you" does not excuse sh*tty behavior toward the person you supposedly love
I like this story signficantly less than "The V word", but I have to say that both really bothered me. I hate the way the female protagonists don't have any real agency, and that their concerns/issues are never really treated as valid, even by their supposed "soulmates"! OF COURSE Marla would be freaked out by the prospect of being bound to someone she's only known for a few days. Anyone would. But rather than give her space/take her seriously, Callum-and, by extension, you as the author-seem to take this "well...get over it," approach that really annoys me, as a reader. I didn't see anything romantic about the way Callum responded with that whole "we're soulmates deal with it" and I really don't like how she is made to feel foolish and bad for how she feels. The same things were in the V word but were less bothersome due to the fact it wasn't as rushed. Tl;dr: "I'm hot and wanna have sex with you" does not excuse sh*tty behavior toward the person you supposedly love
11/5/2011 c19 Queen Midnight
Oka, I've read many of ur stories, but the ending of this one was far better than the other ones' . Maybe it's because of Marla's interesting, amusing atitude and how Justin happens to walk in at the end and say something sarcastic and her ending it with the middle finger while kissing her mate, but it was awesome! I just loved and had to tell you that. Great writing! Keep it up!
Oka, I've read many of ur stories, but the ending of this one was far better than the other ones' . Maybe it's because of Marla's interesting, amusing atitude and how Justin happens to walk in at the end and say something sarcastic and her ending it with the middle finger while kissing her mate, but it was awesome! I just loved and had to tell you that. Great writing! Keep it up!