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7/19/2006 c1 duckiie
aww cute! wow she sure blushes ALOT.. lolol well waiting for the next update?..
7/18/2006 c1 5RedHairedWriter
that was a nice easy read. Cute and daring.

thatnks for the review.
7/15/2006 c1 Ri
LMAO great one-shot that could be a great multi-chaptered story *hinthint* lolz
7/12/2006 c1 109ADSpencer
Hahahaha! That was funny. I don't like Chemistry myself, but I get anything can be improved upon:) Nice job.

OH, and thanks for the review you left me.
6/27/2006 c1 1Sylvia Marri
Lol. I had fun reading your story. Your characters are something, but i couldn't make out a lot from their characters since this is just a one-shot. :) You said there's a possibility for you to make this a full-blown story. This reader certainly wouldn't mind, and would love to delve deepers into Will, Fila, CJ and Shelly's minds. :) Fun story you have here. Do continue?
6/19/2006 c1 8Out-Spoken-Runaway
Haha, great one-shot. I think if you added chapters it be awesome. But the ending lets us create our own ending. xD Keep writing.

6/17/2006 c1 addicted2storiz
I realize I'm like the 7th person to say that that was cute, (including in various languages), but it was. Maybe you should add just one more chapter to finish it or so... not like a whole 20 chapter thing. Anyway, coolio.
6/17/2006 c1 Guest
aww that's cute. =)
6/17/2006 c1 2cbprice25
Aw... c'est cute.
6/17/2006 c1 2sassnsweet
it jusst had to be a one shot!no
6/17/2006 c1 3Lady Wrye
You jump around a bit, so it is slightly unorganized, but it is cute.

I suggest not using "lol" in the story. That is IM language, not real life. (I'd hope..)
6/17/2006 c1 EnigmaticArsenic
aw. that was extremely cute. loved it.
6/17/2006 c1 118Thenardier
Cute and intriguing. A bit messy at places, but nice story. Unique way of telling it as well.
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