for Chemistry7/15/2006 c1 Ri
LMAO great one-shot that could be a great multi-chaptered story *hinthint* lolz
LMAO great one-shot that could be a great multi-chaptered story *hinthint* lolz
7/12/2006 c1 
109ADSpencer
Hahahaha! That was funny. I don't like Chemistry myself, but I get anything can be improved upon:) Nice job.
OH, and thanks for the review you left me.
109ADSpencerHahahaha! That was funny. I don't like Chemistry myself, but I get anything can be improved upon:) Nice job.
OH, and thanks for the review you left me.
6/27/2006 c1 1Sylvia Marri
Lol. I had fun reading your story. Your characters are something, but i couldn't make out a lot from their characters since this is just a one-shot. :) You said there's a possibility for you to make this a full-blown story. This reader certainly wouldn't mind, and would love to delve deepers into Will, Fila, CJ and Shelly's minds. :) Fun story you have here. Do continue?
1Sylvia MarriLol. I had fun reading your story. Your characters are something, but i couldn't make out a lot from their characters since this is just a one-shot. :) You said there's a possibility for you to make this a full-blown story. This reader certainly wouldn't mind, and would love to delve deepers into Will, Fila, CJ and Shelly's minds. :) Fun story you have here. Do continue?
6/19/2006 c1 8Out-Spoken-Runaway
Haha, great one-shot. I think if you added chapters it be awesome. But the ending lets us create our own ending. xD Keep writing.
IceCold13
8Out-Spoken-RunawayHaha, great one-shot. I think if you added chapters it be awesome. But the ending lets us create our own ending. xD Keep writing.
IceCold13
6/17/2006 c1 addicted2storiz
I realize I'm like the 7th person to say that that was cute, (including in various languages), but it was. Maybe you should add just one more chapter to finish it or so... not like a whole 20 chapter thing. Anyway, coolio.
I realize I'm like the 7th person to say that that was cute, (including in various languages), but it was. Maybe you should add just one more chapter to finish it or so... not like a whole 20 chapter thing. Anyway, coolio.
6/17/2006 c1 Guest
aww that's cute. =)
aww that's cute. =)
6/17/2006 c1 3Lady Wrye
You jump around a bit, so it is slightly unorganized, but it is cute.
I suggest not using "lol" in the story. That is IM language, not real life. (I'd hope..)
3Lady WryeYou jump around a bit, so it is slightly unorganized, but it is cute.
I suggest not using "lol" in the story. That is IM language, not real life. (I'd hope..)
6/17/2006 c1 118Thenardier
Cute and intriguing. A bit messy at places, but nice story. Unique way of telling it as well.
118ThenardierCute and intriguing. A bit messy at places, but nice story. Unique way of telling it as well.