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11/29/2006 c1 17life like whoa
I think it was amazingly talented how you packed so much intensity into such small and simple phrases.

I see where your coming from, I feel the exact same way 90% of the time I spend on this earth.

I feel inferior to EVERYONE yet I come off self-centered and greedy and selfish. Strange how two completely different things can be so easily confused and manipulated. It gets turned around and thrown in our faces. (Good job!)
6/18/2006 c1 18Operation Miranda
I think I see what you're getting at. These lines all sound like they could be the beginnings of journal entries. The simplicity of the phrases in this definitely add to the point you're trying to make. Good job!
6/18/2006 c1 43FURTILL
Great poetry. I'm sensing deep emotion.

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