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11/29/2006 c1 17life like whoa
Aww, that was cute!

"When she is tempted to let no-one in..."

^^Ah, a problem I can relate to oh so well!"^^
6/18/2006 c1 50fairEtales
I like the idea of this. Especially the "tell her...". I think it was really cute. However, the rhyming really didn't work for me; it was quite forced. Free verse might work, though. Nice job. I loved it.
6/18/2006 c1 62Amalia Jagd
this is a very good poem. dont doubt it. just work on the ending... it ends sort of abruptly.

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