for The Predators: The Gateway to Hell6/19/2007 c5 
1Tomoyuki Tanaka
Wow. Nice story with a bit of emotion in it. Hope to see more in future!
1Tomoyuki TanakaWow. Nice story with a bit of emotion in it. Hope to see more in future!
2/21/2007 c4 8simmons
GAH! Its not done yet! oh well, i guess that will make the next few chapters even better. Although truth be said, i kind of liked the length of the Predator chapters.
8simmonsGAH! Its not done yet! oh well, i guess that will make the next few chapters even better. Although truth be said, i kind of liked the length of the Predator chapters.
8/12/2006 c3 Tomoyuki Tanaka
Poor Mark. Hope you'll continue your story. Not as long as your 1st, but it'll do. Hope to see more of the other older characters like Noah and Mark's girlfriend (forgot her name, but she was in the Airforce or something...) But your story is still on the top!
Poor Mark. Hope you'll continue your story. Not as long as your 1st, but it'll do. Hope to see more of the other older characters like Noah and Mark's girlfriend (forgot her name, but she was in the Airforce or something...) But your story is still on the top!
8/10/2006 c3 2The Reader Author
A good start to the sequal to The Predators. I'll get the first real chapter of The Miners up by Monday, or my pen name isn't The Reader & Author!(although technically, there isn't a "&" in there)
2The Reader AuthorA good start to the sequal to The Predators. I'll get the first real chapter of The Miners up by Monday, or my pen name isn't The Reader & Author!(although technically, there isn't a "&" in there)
6/23/2006 c1 The Reader Author
Still going strong with Mark I see. I'm glad and dissapointed that he didn't take the position of Second Lt. in the first story. Glad, because he would have skipped quite a few ranks. Dissapointed, because he deserved it. But, you're the author. Respectfully, The Reader & Author
Still going strong with Mark I see. I'm glad and dissapointed that he didn't take the position of Second Lt. in the first story. Glad, because he would have skipped quite a few ranks. Dissapointed, because he deserved it. But, you're the author. Respectfully, The Reader & Author