for Exodus7/31/2006 c1 GetBehindMeSatan
Wow. This has very strong emotions in it, and I love how you describe everything so beautifully.
My favourite line would have to be about the hair weaving through the grass. It's a very vivid image you portray.
Plus, I was born in June ^_^ Hee. That's probably what attracted me to the poem, I suppose.
Best of luck in writing,
Channa (P.S Thank you for the review of Distant Roses. Sorry I didn't review you back quicker! x)
Wow. This has very strong emotions in it, and I love how you describe everything so beautifully.
My favourite line would have to be about the hair weaving through the grass. It's a very vivid image you portray.
Plus, I was born in June ^_^ Hee. That's probably what attracted me to the poem, I suppose.
Best of luck in writing,
Channa (P.S Thank you for the review of Distant Roses. Sorry I didn't review you back quicker! x)
7/22/2006 c1 Isaac Hoffman
I enjoyed this piece. Reminded me of Cezlaw Milosz's piece "Second Space."
I enjoyed this piece. Reminded me of Cezlaw Milosz's piece "Second Space."
6/20/2006 c1 
20Sythiro
Your not very nice being sarcastic about other peoples work! Are you?Please if you have anything sarcastic to say don't bother reviewing my work!
20SythiroYour not very nice being sarcastic about other peoples work! Are you?Please if you have anything sarcastic to say don't bother reviewing my work!
6/19/2006 c1 32thealternativechild
i didn't know which to post my review on, cos they were all brilliant so i decided to settle on this.
yes, i like this! haha.
32thealternativechildi didn't know which to post my review on, cos they were all brilliant so i decided to settle on this.
yes, i like this! haha.