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1/21/2007 c1 The Cousin
Hey cuz, it's you-know-who, I found your stories and I'll admit that I was quite impressed. You have perfect form and smooth transitions. The only thing that I saw wrong with any of them was the use of cliche's, you have a strong voice, try to use it without using diminishing cliche's and your writing will be as original as it is captivating. I've been working on some stuff too, (got about 35 pages done so far) I'll email them to you some time. Keep at it cuz.
6/19/2006 c1 20Faith O'Brien
This is fantastic. It's dark and lively and brutally revealing.

All in all, I dig.
6/19/2006 c1 Stella Spencer
I loved it. The story was really well written and very emotional. Keep up the excellent work.

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