for Ace Of Spades2/5/2007 c1 
13CiaoBellaxx
i love this. its beautiful and so so sad... heart-breaking really. but i love it.
13CiaoBellaxxi love this. its beautiful and so so sad... heart-breaking really. but i love it.
8/18/2006 c1 2My Sweetheart the Drunk
oh wow, this is so beautiful
the imagery is amazing, and using formatting to make your point or to add to the picture is completely genius.
loved it!
2My Sweetheart the Drunkoh wow, this is so beautiful
the imagery is amazing, and using formatting to make your point or to add to the picture is completely genius.
loved it!
6/29/2006 c1 free-to-dream15
Well first of all, I've got to say that I've been out of town so that has been why it has taken me so long to read (and the fact that I finally have two more chapters to the sequel lol) so I'm sorry but now I can read! This was absolutly amazing! I don't even know what to say! Literally took my breath away lol
Well first of all, I've got to say that I've been out of town so that has been why it has taken me so long to read (and the fact that I finally have two more chapters to the sequel lol) so I'm sorry but now I can read! This was absolutly amazing! I don't even know what to say! Literally took my breath away lol
6/23/2006 c1 15Rutoh-Chan
Wow, a very nice poem. I like it. I like how you made it poetic without rhyming. It's one of my favorite styles of poetry, but I notice lots of people tend to stick to rhyming. Power to free verse. You did excelent work with it.
15Rutoh-ChanWow, a very nice poem. I like it. I like how you made it poetic without rhyming. It's one of my favorite styles of poetry, but I notice lots of people tend to stick to rhyming. Power to free verse. You did excelent work with it.
6/22/2006 c1 special
oh wow. that was beautiful.
"crying overthe tiredness of the wind"
"rewinding the sins painted on your skin"
lovely. lovely. lovely.
keep up the great work.
;)allie
oh wow. that was beautiful.
"crying overthe tiredness of the wind"
"rewinding the sins painted on your skin"
lovely. lovely. lovely.
keep up the great work.
;)allie
6/19/2006 c1 11LEDlorien7
wow, this poem is so beautiful. I love the way you write poetry, i love it. I don't quite understand it, i think it would take many readings for it to be clear. But i love the metaphors anyway. I like that i don't understand all of it. it's a good thing.
11LEDlorien7wow, this poem is so beautiful. I love the way you write poetry, i love it. I don't quite understand it, i think it would take many readings for it to be clear. But i love the metaphors anyway. I like that i don't understand all of it. it's a good thing.
6/19/2006 c1 17Murder245
I'm totally speechless. I couldn't possibly say anything that would do it justice. Amazing doesn't even begin to cover it.
~j. lynn
17Murder245I'm totally speechless. I couldn't possibly say anything that would do it justice. Amazing doesn't even begin to cover it.
~j. lynn
6/19/2006 c1 10Hell's first Icicle
brilliant. amazing. i love it. so much.*shakes head* i've never been good with words, so i don't quite know how to convey how wonderful i found this...
"somehow you always make me feellike Bambi on ice""(All that was left was anechoinglonelyi …)""until I’m left in tatterswith just the jokers to cling to"
...it's perfect.
10Hell's first Iciclebrilliant. amazing. i love it. so much.*shakes head* i've never been good with words, so i don't quite know how to convey how wonderful i found this...
"somehow you always make me feellike Bambi on ice""(All that was left was anechoinglonelyi …)""until I’m left in tatterswith just the jokers to cling to"
...it's perfect.
6/19/2006 c1 20Autumn Dance
I have a headache form crying over this so much. It's beyond me to describe. I guess the fact that I just sobbed reading it might. It's heartwrenching. So beautiful. I can't begin to tell you...
20Autumn DanceI have a headache form crying over this so much. It's beyond me to describe. I guess the fact that I just sobbed reading it might. It's heartwrenching. So beautiful. I can't begin to tell you...