9/22/2021 c1 1SiriuslyLuvmaiL
This is an amazing story, I keep coming back to check and see if it’s been updated again! Like the others reviews say, it’s not like a run of the mill romance story, I love how different it is
This is an amazing story, I keep coming back to check and see if it’s been updated again! Like the others reviews say, it’s not like a run of the mill romance story, I love how different it is
5/1/2021 c1 AvegaLil
This book has an amazing story that shows great promise. If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on Novel Star, just submit your story to or
This book has an amazing story that shows great promise. If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on Novel Star, just submit your story to or
5/25/2020 c12 Guest
Jesus, holy crap! Usually when I see a really old story get uodated it's because the author got tired of plagiarism and took it down, so this was a surprise! This story is definitely not like most others clogging up the Romance section. It's actually realistic, unlike all the "falling in love with my brother's best friend" crap. I'm also not one of your old readers, but if I ever get the time I'll check out your other writing!
Jesus, holy crap! Usually when I see a really old story get uodated it's because the author got tired of plagiarism and took it down, so this was a surprise! This story is definitely not like most others clogging up the Romance section. It's actually realistic, unlike all the "falling in love with my brother's best friend" crap. I'm also not one of your old readers, but if I ever get the time I'll check out your other writing!
12/14/2011 c1 Seila
You should please please please continue writing this story. This is by far my favorite story that I have read on fp in a long time. PLEASE!
You should please please please continue writing this story. This is by far my favorite story that I have read on fp in a long time. PLEASE!
8/16/2008 c11 alfers
Dude! Where have you gone? *points at unfinished stories* You have work to do missy! And don't pretend you're not there. You updated your profile in July!
Dude! Where have you gone? *points at unfinished stories* You have work to do missy! And don't pretend you're not there. You updated your profile in July!
5/10/2008 c1 justbecause
Hi! I'm just wondering, is this story on hiatus or will you be continuing it? (please finish!) this is my favorite of all your stories, and the only one i've seen on fp that has native americans in it.
Hi! I'm just wondering, is this story on hiatus or will you be continuing it? (please finish!) this is my favorite of all your stories, and the only one i've seen on fp that has native americans in it.
4/2/2008 c11 17MirrorMirrorOnTheWall
I really liked this story, its down to earth, and your story speaks volumes of these kind of problems, I am continually amazed by your ability to change into different characters, and how you let them grow. I can't wait for Bryce to grow, and Shelby as well. I was so bummed when i saw that you haven't updated this in FOREVER... i hate to have to move onto something else. please update! at least you could leave us a memo so we waiting fans dont keep our hopes up? *hopefully waiting!*
Shayla
I really liked this story, its down to earth, and your story speaks volumes of these kind of problems, I am continually amazed by your ability to change into different characters, and how you let them grow. I can't wait for Bryce to grow, and Shelby as well. I was so bummed when i saw that you haven't updated this in FOREVER... i hate to have to move onto something else. please update! at least you could leave us a memo so we waiting fans dont keep our hopes up? *hopefully waiting!*
Shayla
3/27/2008 c11 9SolisLuna
augh, racist parts bug the shit outta me, but i love this story! so good, please update soon!
augh, racist parts bug the shit outta me, but i love this story! so good, please update soon!
8/24/2007 c11 essie
Hi! Wow! What a rare find.
I like Bryce. He's so immature yet adorable. Kind of like a rough diamond at the moment.
& Shelby! Go polish him girly! hahahah
Your story is great. I like that it has depth. Not just a simple story.
Hi! Wow! What a rare find.
I like Bryce. He's so immature yet adorable. Kind of like a rough diamond at the moment.
& Shelby! Go polish him girly! hahahah
Your story is great. I like that it has depth. Not just a simple story.
5/14/2007 c11 pockets are my friends
When I started reading this story, I just couldn't quite get into it. But after the first couple of chapters I began to like it more and more. Now I see you stopped updating it quite some time ago and I'm a little disappointed because I actually want to know what happens next. So please, try to update again.
When I started reading this story, I just couldn't quite get into it. But after the first couple of chapters I began to like it more and more. Now I see you stopped updating it quite some time ago and I'm a little disappointed because I actually want to know what happens next. So please, try to update again.