for Inertia12/8/2008 c1 
9Narq
This is soo nice~
I wonder if you'll update this one or if it's a one-shot..
Narq.
9NarqThis is soo nice~
I wonder if you'll update this one or if it's a one-shot..
Narq.
8/29/2007 c1 mary
your really good with writing a graphic sex scene you should definatly write more soon maybe!
your really good with writing a graphic sex scene you should definatly write more soon maybe!
10/26/2006 c1 11Luv and Peace
Great story. The ending was kind of abrupt and I was wondering why the guy was in a bar in his boxers. Was it his own personal bar, like in suite? But other than that, I think it was a good light hearted fluff story. Awesome!
11Luv and PeaceGreat story. The ending was kind of abrupt and I was wondering why the guy was in a bar in his boxers. Was it his own personal bar, like in suite? But other than that, I think it was a good light hearted fluff story. Awesome!
6/20/2006 c2 mg
i like this, because it's lighthearted fluff =] i just needed something like this to cheer me up today, so thanks =]
i like this, because it's lighthearted fluff =] i just needed something like this to cheer me up today, so thanks =]
6/20/2006 c1 Secret Heart01
This short story is very very intriguing; I think it'd be fantastic if you continue the storyline ... it makes the reader wonder about the history of the two characters, and about what would happen after ... definitely, I hope you'll expand on the story!
This short story is very very intriguing; I think it'd be fantastic if you continue the storyline ... it makes the reader wonder about the history of the two characters, and about what would happen after ... definitely, I hope you'll expand on the story!
6/19/2006 c1 7BangBangYourDead
wow. That was descriptive alright. In a way, it seems somewhat sad.
Nice job!
7BangBangYourDeadwow. That was descriptive alright. In a way, it seems somewhat sad.
Nice job!
6/19/2006 c1 8bulletproof.cupid
darling, i thought this was wonderful. the description in the beginning blew me away - how you described his face. it was sensual and oh-so very brilliant. you had me in awe. i think i blinked after that paragraph because you did take me out of this world for a second. hah.
the ending was the best, for me. that last line (inertia, indeed) - and how you described his look as sterile. i don't know how you do it dear, all the comparisons. wow. ooh and my friend discussed that with me once, as funny as it is. she said she was going to give the guy the best night of his life so he could remember her and then cruelly added that she'd chop of his dick so he could never experience it again. hah, all in the name of heartbreak i guess.
wonderful work. i've already said that hmm. eh. i should really be studying right now. i have a final exam and shit, i'll be giggling pathetically in a while after i've lost it. ah fuck it.
excuse the language. take care and good luck on those exams. if i had half as much talent as you, i'd be writing too. heart it all.
(♥)
8bulletproof.cupiddarling, i thought this was wonderful. the description in the beginning blew me away - how you described his face. it was sensual and oh-so very brilliant. you had me in awe. i think i blinked after that paragraph because you did take me out of this world for a second. hah.
the ending was the best, for me. that last line (inertia, indeed) - and how you described his look as sterile. i don't know how you do it dear, all the comparisons. wow. ooh and my friend discussed that with me once, as funny as it is. she said she was going to give the guy the best night of his life so he could remember her and then cruelly added that she'd chop of his dick so he could never experience it again. hah, all in the name of heartbreak i guess.
wonderful work. i've already said that hmm. eh. i should really be studying right now. i have a final exam and shit, i'll be giggling pathetically in a while after i've lost it. ah fuck it.
excuse the language. take care and good luck on those exams. if i had half as much talent as you, i'd be writing too. heart it all.
(♥)
6/19/2006 c1 56onyxdragonflyy
I think you did a great job! I've never written one either.. or yet... who knows what the future may brings... but yes! You can easliy follow the characters and be pulled into the story. I hope to catch more of your stories. Keep writting! ^^
56onyxdragonflyyI think you did a great job! I've never written one either.. or yet... who knows what the future may brings... but yes! You can easliy follow the characters and be pulled into the story. I hope to catch more of your stories. Keep writting! ^^