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11/19/2006 c1 Michelle Rainey
I Had a best freind that i fell in love with but diodn't speakit . only cause I was afraid of rejection and would chase him away. If he loved me he didn't say it.If he said it would have changed things. I wouldv'e been with a doctor or computer spessialist that could hold a job, and love me too. lol instead a met a bad boy with a good heart had kids with him 3 even andhe had my trust and my heart and betrayed me in the end anyway. his love for me wasn't strong enough to stay out of trouble. i wish I would have told my best freiond that i loved him even though the timing was bad. now neither of us will ever know for sure if we loved eachother.as a best friend you need to tell her you are in love with her.even if it doesn't change things, at least you'll have closure and if she loves you the same she needs to call it off with that guy, if she's not certain what she wants give her space and time and be her freind but let her know you love her . wb if you wish. sincerely michelle.
8/12/2006 c8 5jointedlegs
haha yeah "But you have to get off your ass and

Make the first move.

Because I’m old fashioned like that.

"

Nice one! I feel for you. Your compilation of poems is interesting...sorta like all inter-linked. Don't stop!
8/12/2006 c6 jointedlegs
I like it! :) Love the rhyme...
8/12/2006 c5 jointedlegs
I like "they were a solemn lullaby". I so get what you mean...

"So I'm writing this down as a loss" Sounds a bit...eh weird? o.O I dunno. But the whole feel is good.
6/19/2006 c1 at the bottom of everything
oh wow. this reminds me completely of what happened with me and my best friend... only ours went rather worse. anyways, i like the interesting writing style. your poem's true to the end, and i like it. and don't worry- without her, you'd find your way.
6/19/2006 c1 6BitterSweet24
Except for the virginity part, this is how I've been feeling towards one of my best friends a lot lately. Very well done. ~Mina~

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