
1/4/2008 c1
19Raleven
Aw! This one is adorable! I like the theme of questions you have in there and your rhyming scheme. I think that this poem is well written and very accurate for a large variety of people. We always want our friends to remain with us

Aw! This one is adorable! I like the theme of questions you have in there and your rhyming scheme. I think that this poem is well written and very accurate for a large variety of people. We always want our friends to remain with us
7/2/2006 c1
15x-kit-x
Aw another great poem so keep up the good work. Its a shame about the formatting, I often have trouble with it not working *grumble*. Did you write this poem with anyone imparticular in mind?

Aw another great poem so keep up the good work. Its a shame about the formatting, I often have trouble with it not working *grumble*. Did you write this poem with anyone imparticular in mind?
6/22/2006 c1
5Pokey831
This was really good. It reminded me of the person that used to be my best friend, who would have said yes to all of it a couple years ago. Though now he's married and I'll never see him again...but yeah, great poem. You did really well at touching MY emotions, at least.

This was really good. It reminded me of the person that used to be my best friend, who would have said yes to all of it a couple years ago. Though now he's married and I'll never see him again...but yeah, great poem. You did really well at touching MY emotions, at least.
6/21/2006 c1 Caity Bean
Wow, ths is truly an amazing poem. It really had movement to it. You really know how to keep somebody intersted and keep reading...good job and keep up the work
Wow, ths is truly an amazing poem. It really had movement to it. You really know how to keep somebody intersted and keep reading...good job and keep up the work