for Two Night Haikus6/22/2006 c1 
15Yuki Sasaki
Lovely imagery in the second haiku. The first one was pretty good as well. Keep up the good work.
15Yuki SasakiLovely imagery in the second haiku. The first one was pretty good as well. Keep up the good work.
6/22/2006 c1 14moonsliver86
I liked the imagery created in the second haiku... As for the first one, it wasn't as powerful but it was still good... keep on writing...
14moonsliver86I liked the imagery created in the second haiku... As for the first one, it wasn't as powerful but it was still good... keep on writing...