
4/1/2020 c26 Soothsayer35
Is there any chance you have completed and published this story? It’s fantastic and I’m so sad to have found it late incomplete.
Is there any chance you have completed and published this story? It’s fantastic and I’m so sad to have found it late incomplete.
1/9/2019 c26 anon
I keep coming back to check for an update because this is honestly one of the best stories I’ve read! It’s been so long but not giving up hope - I hope you’re out of writer’s block or whatever the obstacle is and post another chapter up soon!
I keep coming back to check for an update because this is honestly one of the best stories I’ve read! It’s been so long but not giving up hope - I hope you’re out of writer’s block or whatever the obstacle is and post another chapter up soon!
3/8/2017 c26 jia
where is the rest of the story!?
why!?111
where is the rest of the story!?
why!?111
8/21/2016 c26 Guest
OH GOD NO ITS UNFINISHED WTF NONONONO YOU CAN NOT DO THIS YOU CANT START SOMETHING LIKE THIS AND THEN DISSAPEAR FOR TWI FREAKING YEARS OMG I STAYED UP ALL NIGHT READING THIS AND THERES NO ENDING AAHHHH LITERALLY MY WORST NIGHTMARE *cries*
OH GOD NO ITS UNFINISHED WTF NONONONO YOU CAN NOT DO THIS YOU CANT START SOMETHING LIKE THIS AND THEN DISSAPEAR FOR TWI FREAKING YEARS OMG I STAYED UP ALL NIGHT READING THIS AND THERES NO ENDING AAHHHH LITERALLY MY WORST NIGHTMARE *cries*
5/26/2016 c26
1TheLittleGirlWithAFrenchBeret
I just found this story, I know I haven't been with you through all the years that you've been writing it, and I know that you last updated six years ago, so even though I really would love for you to continue this story ad see where it goes...I don't know if that will happen. Will it happen? I can always hope.

I just found this story, I know I haven't been with you through all the years that you've been writing it, and I know that you last updated six years ago, so even though I really would love for you to continue this story ad see where it goes...I don't know if that will happen. Will it happen? I can always hope.
5/2/2016 c26
2Danica West
Imagine my surprise when I finally stumbled upon a story worth reading, well written, funny and with a interesting plot... and then I reach chapter 26 and by the end of it I'm like, "where is that 'next' button, where oh where?!" ...and then I realise it's not complete and hasn't been updated for years :( aaw, I wanted to cry.. you left it on such a cliffhanger, and it was/is really a good story.
But I'm not any better myself.. I've also written a story and not updated in over a year, but I hope I'll one day finish it :)
Anyways... please, please, please finish your story!
I really want to know what happened with Emo and who he really was.. and we need to see Lana and Antony's happy ending :)

Imagine my surprise when I finally stumbled upon a story worth reading, well written, funny and with a interesting plot... and then I reach chapter 26 and by the end of it I'm like, "where is that 'next' button, where oh where?!" ...and then I realise it's not complete and hasn't been updated for years :( aaw, I wanted to cry.. you left it on such a cliffhanger, and it was/is really a good story.
But I'm not any better myself.. I've also written a story and not updated in over a year, but I hope I'll one day finish it :)
Anyways... please, please, please finish your story!
I really want to know what happened with Emo and who he really was.. and we need to see Lana and Antony's happy ending :)
3/9/2016 c26 bridgettblah
tbh I can never let go of a really good story, like this one. Sad to see its not been updated. Totally worth the read tho!
tbh I can never let go of a really good story, like this one. Sad to see its not been updated. Totally worth the read tho!
11/3/2015 c26
71Bob Evans
Golly, it's been years since I've returned to this ensemble.
Sorry it never saw its finish, because it was headed there in all the right ways. I hope that wherever you are in your life adventures beyond Fiction Press, they have taken you to some pretty sweet places.
Also, thank you for not taking this down like so many other despondent FP writers. It's always fun to pop back in and read for nostalgia's sake.
And who knows? Maybe one day you will return to see it finished.

Golly, it's been years since I've returned to this ensemble.
Sorry it never saw its finish, because it was headed there in all the right ways. I hope that wherever you are in your life adventures beyond Fiction Press, they have taken you to some pretty sweet places.
Also, thank you for not taking this down like so many other despondent FP writers. It's always fun to pop back in and read for nostalgia's sake.
And who knows? Maybe one day you will return to see it finished.
6/19/2015 c26 wtf
Out of all chapters to end a cliffhanger it's the one where Emo is killed but for what reason?
Out of all chapters to end a cliffhanger it's the one where Emo is killed but for what reason?
3/12/2015 c26 quivering quill1
i know its been a long time since you wrote anything on this story, but please continue writing. This story is fun and sweet and deserves a good ending 3
i know its been a long time since you wrote anything on this story, but please continue writing. This story is fun and sweet and deserves a good ending 3
10/3/2014 c26 sarah4onerocketmail.com
pretty pls update suspense isn't to good 4 my eager eyes (-;
pretty pls update suspense isn't to good 4 my eager eyes (-;
10/2/2014 c26 Scribblesandink
I come back every couple of months to check and see if there have been any more chapters added. Please come back?
I come back every couple of months to check and see if there have been any more chapters added. Please come back?
8/3/2014 c26 WAAAHHH
It's been so long, and I'm still dying for you next chapter! Keep it up!
It's been so long, and I'm still dying for you next chapter! Keep it up!
7/3/2014 c26
1ryllie
Wow, this is such a great story - I really hope you update some time in the future (I know it's been a while since the last update, but I still have faith haha - at least give us a summary of what would have happened?)
Keep up the great work.
-ryllie

Wow, this is such a great story - I really hope you update some time in the future (I know it's been a while since the last update, but I still have faith haha - at least give us a summary of what would have happened?)
Keep up the great work.
-ryllie
3/22/2014 c26
4Kina Kalamari
Oh my god. Are you serious? THAT'S WHERE IT ENDS? Are you going to update again? (Please?)
I must say, this story is awesome. I love the way you've used her kidnapping as the plot device to tell the story. That's just brilliant. And your prose is wonderful, and the relationships between everyone are fun and believable. I just... I don't want to never know how it ends!

Oh my god. Are you serious? THAT'S WHERE IT ENDS? Are you going to update again? (Please?)
I must say, this story is awesome. I love the way you've used her kidnapping as the plot device to tell the story. That's just brilliant. And your prose is wonderful, and the relationships between everyone are fun and believable. I just... I don't want to never know how it ends!