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1/26/2008 c1 123Black and White Dreams
this is so beautiful.

its really deep.

I love the line

"An angel with brown hazelnut eyes

is smiling brightly at my side."

i love how did the heart with the words.

it emphasizes the whole poem.

very powerful stuff here.

good job.
2/14/2007 c1 1irishangel110290
I LOVE THE WAY YOU DID THE HEART TO PUT MORE EMPHASIS ON THE ONE THING YOU HAVE TRIED TO GET THROUGH TO EVERY ONE WHO HAS READ YOUR WORKS. I LOVE THE POEM AND IT IS REALLY NICE
7/19/2006 c1 44RomeoandJuliet
Wow...that was amazing. I have never seen someone put so much thought not only in the words of the poem but as well as the visual. ONE of my new fav.
6/22/2006 c1 19anamellie
wow! this poem is so cute. i especially like the way you narrate it simply but it ended up so beautiful to hear. (yeah... i've read your poem aloud).

and the format is so nice!
6/22/2006 c1 6christiandanielle
wow! concrete poem? I haven't seen one in a long long time. I like it, it's very sweet and simple. keep writing!

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