for January 431/26/2008 c1 
123Black and White Dreams
this is so beautiful.
its really deep.
I love the line
"An angel with brown hazelnut eyes
is smiling brightly at my side."
i love how did the heart with the words.
it emphasizes the whole poem.
very powerful stuff here.
good job.
123Black and White Dreamsthis is so beautiful.
its really deep.
I love the line
"An angel with brown hazelnut eyes
is smiling brightly at my side."
i love how did the heart with the words.
it emphasizes the whole poem.
very powerful stuff here.
good job.
2/14/2007 c1 1irishangel110290
I LOVE THE WAY YOU DID THE HEART TO PUT MORE EMPHASIS ON THE ONE THING YOU HAVE TRIED TO GET THROUGH TO EVERY ONE WHO HAS READ YOUR WORKS. I LOVE THE POEM AND IT IS REALLY NICE
1irishangel110290I LOVE THE WAY YOU DID THE HEART TO PUT MORE EMPHASIS ON THE ONE THING YOU HAVE TRIED TO GET THROUGH TO EVERY ONE WHO HAS READ YOUR WORKS. I LOVE THE POEM AND IT IS REALLY NICE
7/19/2006 c1 44RomeoandJuliet
Wow...that was amazing. I have never seen someone put so much thought not only in the words of the poem but as well as the visual. ONE of my new fav.
44RomeoandJulietWow...that was amazing. I have never seen someone put so much thought not only in the words of the poem but as well as the visual. ONE of my new fav.
6/22/2006 c1 19anamellie
wow! this poem is so cute. i especially like the way you narrate it simply but it ended up so beautiful to hear. (yeah... i've read your poem aloud).
and the format is so nice!
19anamelliewow! this poem is so cute. i especially like the way you narrate it simply but it ended up so beautiful to hear. (yeah... i've read your poem aloud).
and the format is so nice!
6/22/2006 c1 6christiandanielle
wow! concrete poem? I haven't seen one in a long long time. I like it, it's very sweet and simple. keep writing!
6christiandaniellewow! concrete poem? I haven't seen one in a long long time. I like it, it's very sweet and simple. keep writing!