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6/25/2006 c1 6Lady Death 77
Oh! He likes her! Nice job chica!
6/22/2006 c1 63Let It Rain
This looks good so far. You might want to use more imagery to make the piece more detailed. :) Keep writing!
6/22/2006 c1 Robin Siskin
To be quite honest, I don't see anything about this that sets it apart from the cheesy Lifetime movies that we see every day. We've got a young mom, so sad, and we've got her dependant on this one job, but she can't keep it because she has to take care of her baby, but don't worry for long, audience! There's a man who's willing to help her and their relationship just might blossom into something...deeper.

If I can figure out the basic plot from the first few paragraphs, you need a little bit of work on it.

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