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7/2/2006 c1 65Nemonus
Aw! I like it. I can relate, in a way. I like the rhythm, again unique, and especially the way the first line of the last stanza fits in, and "A single thread bound between us/Taunt and rigid/And so close to breaking" . Very nice, with trapped emotion.
7/1/2006 c1 19hOpeinareddress
This is fantasic. I love it.

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