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10/10/2010 c1 20diwu6398
Hello. Thank you for subscribing, I guess. I just gave this a sort of quicker than normal read (sorry, I'm really busy right now; I'm trying to get information for a poster I need to make by Thursday) so this is going to be a quicker than normal review.

I'm not really sure what I thought about this story. I felt like it had too much dialogue and not enough description and stuff. But apart from that, I felt like this story could go somewhere good. Um... the characters were pretty well developed. ARGH I FORGOT WHAT I WANTED TO SAY! Okay, I'll just stop there.
12/10/2008 c1 71Subbie
hmm. Sounds interesting. Maybe more details about his before-relationship? But great job anyways and I hope you update soon!

And in his and Dan's relationship, was Dan abusive, or...?

Anyways, can't wait for more.

Lee

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