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7/10/2007 c1 16aa-Moss
For something written in two minutes, it's very impressive. I have to say that when you shy away from structure, your poetry turns out to have more of an impact - this is probably my favourite piece of yours. The third stanza seems the weakest, but I think the last is quite powerful.
6/27/2006 c1 30Raiyune
The format itself doesn't sound awkward at all. In the second stanza, the alliteration of "hollow hallowed halls" works wonderfully. Only thing I would say is that the ending seems a bit questionable. Well written, as always! :]

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