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8/3/2006 c1 34Smoky Bear
this is a beautiful vision. very emotive and serene. lovely work.
7/23/2006 c1 22theverysadclown
wow.I loved Poem.I loved how you incorperated nature to your poem.
7/6/2006 c1 879Moondog Dozier
The structure and development of this are marvelous. Very deliberate in the wording, which accentuates each line by emphasizing certain points. Wonderfully visual. Good work.
7/3/2006 c1 19Burnt Bread
That's right - where have you been bichola? Been checking your profile now and then and nothing for the past 4 months. But good to see you return.

Truthfully, this probably isn't one of your best works, though admittedly, still generally in your type of style. However, having said that, my fav lines:

"Blowing leaves into

The

Autumn

Sky"

I think it's the spacing that makes he line appeal so much- an action, then each word has it's own line and therefore evokes an equally strong image. Hope to see more sometime.

Bread.
6/25/2006 c1 56from beneath the bell jar
Great imagery in this! great piece.

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