for About Him6/25/2006 c1 
1Cliff Zingler
This is some good stuff. No kidding - I loved it! You have wonderful descriptions, and I love the ending with the "lie" part - clever!
- cliff
1Cliff ZinglerThis is some good stuff. No kidding - I loved it! You have wonderful descriptions, and I love the ending with the "lie" part - clever!
- cliff
6/25/2006 c1 Fiore Chnudth
Wow...
I didn't get half of that! :-) But the cool part of it is that I got the big picture. So, I understand the point, but not the details.
This is probably what'll make me read it again in a moment.
Nice work!
Wow...
I didn't get half of that! :-) But the cool part of it is that I got the big picture. So, I understand the point, but not the details.
This is probably what'll make me read it again in a moment.
Nice work!