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7/19/2009 c1 1tonight we bloom
Wow this is completely brilliant. The words you chose and the descriptions you used, everything was just so beautiful.

I would love opinions from a talented writer like yourself on my work! It would really mean a lot.
9/29/2007 c1 871no.peace.los.angeles
I realize you wrote this over a year ago, but it is so beautiful, and I felt the need to review it now. The way you string words together, how they bump off and melt into each other, that is just fantastic. The last line is stunning. Gorgeous piece. Keep writing! :)
5/25/2007 c1 74lacking motivation
it sounds so sad, but the combination of words is so nice. so many ideas compacted into one single extended sentence.
6/25/2006 c1 38Fate Thirteen
Absolutely gorgeous; languidly beautiful.

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