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5darknessblooms
I like this feeling of a stream of consciousness, like the reader can see your thought process, as you go from one image to another, interrupting yourself and going back. The ending is interesting, though I'm not sure what to make of it. Also, "to" instead of "ta" in the second line. Otherwise, nicely done.
5darknessbloomsI like this feeling of a stream of consciousness, like the reader can see your thought process, as you go from one image to another, interrupting yourself and going back. The ending is interesting, though I'm not sure what to make of it. Also, "to" instead of "ta" in the second line. Otherwise, nicely done.