
7/31/2010 c13 CraziiFlop
Darn that Jake fellow... Aiden! GET BETTER! D:
xD
LOL I love your story, it made me think of myself in some perspectives o.O
Darn that Jake fellow... Aiden! GET BETTER! D:
xD
LOL I love your story, it made me think of myself in some perspectives o.O
1/19/2010 c13 Pinks
WHERE IS THE REST OF THE STORY!
WHERE IS THE REST OF THE STORY!
10/22/2006 c13 sum1got2aol.com
its moving
so
fast.
but so cute.
but im gonna have to stop reading it
cause im in love with aiden
and they're gonna break up
and ill be depressed
so i just wanna tell u ur a frightingly talented author
and i would keep reading
i just have a thing against breaking up
with hot emos.
its moving
so
fast.
but so cute.
but im gonna have to stop reading it
cause im in love with aiden
and they're gonna break up
and ill be depressed
so i just wanna tell u ur a frightingly talented author
and i would keep reading
i just have a thing against breaking up
with hot emos.
8/21/2006 c13
12elisefey
I keep waiting for it all to fall apart. Things are just too good to be true right now.

I keep waiting for it all to fall apart. Things are just too good to be true right now.
8/21/2006 c13 angela
wow please update soon! does Jake like her?
wow please update soon! does Jake like her?
8/20/2006 c2 elisefey
Okay, this thing about Tiffany competitively exagerrating her day until it sounded either better or worse than everyone else's is the most real life annoying quirk that I've ever seen anyone use in a highschool villain. And I'm picky about highschool villains so you deserve major props for that.
Okay, this thing about Tiffany competitively exagerrating her day until it sounded either better or worse than everyone else's is the most real life annoying quirk that I've ever seen anyone use in a highschool villain. And I'm picky about highschool villains so you deserve major props for that.
8/20/2006 c1 elisefey
I love this opening. It is totally intriguing, captures my attention and makes me want to learn more about what happened.
I love this opening. It is totally intriguing, captures my attention and makes me want to learn more about what happened.
8/15/2006 c9 lolsq
yo. I like the plot. Chapters are a little short, but whatever. Aloud. As in out loud
yo. I like the plot. Chapters are a little short, but whatever. Aloud. As in out loud
7/25/2006 c11 carlyatthedisco
aiden james is probably one of the prettiest names i've ever heard.
who's cole?
aiden james is probably one of the prettiest names i've ever heard.
who's cole?